Hi Maria,
I don't know that we have too many editors out here. There are members that will read over your work and give you feedback , but most of them prefer to be your friend before they do that.
There is a list of the story moderators here, but I don't recommend just sending them material, they're extremely busy looking after the story queue.
What I would suggest is write up your work, run it through Grammarly, and Word spell check a few times.
Have a look at the advice sections on this part of the forum and Morgan Hawk's exceptional guides.
Go visit the forums and the chat rooms , introduce yourself to this wonderful community.
When you do that you might find someone who likes the way you write and is willing to proof read your work.
If you really want a brutal critique submit a story and the feedback you get is exactly what you need to work on, but it can be hard to take in one go.
Best advice is what I Got from James, Write fast edit slow.
Chatterbox Blonde- Rumps Mystical Bartender
Whatever was posted is always meant in love and respect never to offend.
I'm also highly likely to have posted this from a phone so there may be typos or odd word changes, auto correct can be a pain.
I've been listening to my kinky pencil here's my current work
