Well, after my first period of despair and big problems with feeling molested through my story. I am now happy to (when I have changed two things) present my new story.
I have come to the conclusion that... My dear firend did a good job, in taking my harsh words and all. I am certain I will feel the same next time he helps me edit something but I am sure to learn in the process.
Nicola, I wouldn't complain about that.
(my first story got through... that says a lot :P)
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Catnip
Over 90 days ago
Female
Sweden
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Internet Sensation
I don't have a good degree in English.
My grammar is decent, my punctuation is a bit messed up.
I know these things. That is why I took help from a friend of mine who is good at it.
Giving me back a story I hardly recognise.
I haven't even read it all, but the frustration of someone putting their fingers in what I have created.
For some reason it hurts.
Atleast now...
Anyone else had this experience?
I'm sure once I've read through it all a bit more and thought about it, I won't change much back to how it was.
But I kind of start to wonder, will it feel the same everytime or will I change my writing so that one day I wont need someone to help me edit it.
Time to go back to reading through the changes.
My grammar is decent, my punctuation is a bit messed up.
I know these things. That is why I took help from a friend of mine who is good at it.
Giving me back a story I hardly recognise.
I haven't even read it all, but the frustration of someone putting their fingers in what I have created.
For some reason it hurts.
Atleast now...
Anyone else had this experience?
I'm sure once I've read through it all a bit more and thought about it, I won't change much back to how it was.
But I kind of start to wonder, will it feel the same everytime or will I change my writing so that one day I wont need someone to help me edit it.
Time to go back to reading through the changes.
Internet Sensation
Yes, I have.
I'm not going to go into details about who and when.
But the reason I was "addicted" was that no one else turned me on. nothing else did.
He was the only one, who could make my juices flow.
Not even me thinking about him would do. He had to talk to me for me to get even the slightest aroused.
We worked that out... it was a real bother lol.
I'm still sexually attatched to him.
But I can get turned on by other things too.
I'm not going to go into details about who and when.
But the reason I was "addicted" was that no one else turned me on. nothing else did.
He was the only one, who could make my juices flow.
Not even me thinking about him would do. He had to talk to me for me to get even the slightest aroused.
We worked that out... it was a real bother lol.
I'm still sexually attatched to him.
But I can get turned on by other things too.
Internet Sensation
Quote by gav
Customer: "I would like a big mac and a quarter cheese"
Catnip: "Would you like timestamps with that?"
You should see an online/away link next to the "Welcome back..." message in the header.
I seem to have a problem with the formatting the timestamp on the chat window, i'll need to fix this up later.
Let me know if you see any problems.
(btw you may need to ctrl F5 to refresh your cache)
Ö.ö
Sounds great.
I can see myself standing there...
Oh, lord.
Internet Sensation
Quote by nicolaQuote by Catnip
I want it everywhere. haha time stamps on everything
Hehe time is on my side.
waahhahahahhaa And I want pictures everywhere too!
and big pony's...
and people who do not get sick when I am about to come visit them.
Post of the week award
*bows*
I would like to thank Australia and Sweden.
I would like to thank the US for it's half hearted support.
I would like to thank my neighbor countries and Pakistan for being there for me...
Last but not least I would like to thank the Internet, even though I know I'm much better.
I mean.. I would like to thank Internet for...
Hm...
Internet Sensation
Just one thing...
Nicola, by writing www.lushstories.com/catnip you do not get to my page. You did miss the members part of it all.
I just realised, I havent really been interested in looking this thread up since I know aslong as people read my work even if it's just a few I am happy.
though I have been sending links to my profile pretty much anyhow so it should be www.lushstories.com/members/catnip.aspx
Keep on posting everyone and don't forget the members and the aspx at the end of your links.
Nicola, by writing www.lushstories.com/catnip you do not get to my page. You did miss the members part of it all.
I just realised, I havent really been interested in looking this thread up since I know aslong as people read my work even if it's just a few I am happy.
though I have been sending links to my profile pretty much anyhow so it should be www.lushstories.com/members/catnip.aspx
Keep on posting everyone and don't forget the members and the aspx at the end of your links.
Conga[drumming like mad]rat[Peeep!]u[points]lace[hehe]ions... 
Internet Sensation
Quote by gav
Oh my, I have an audience now....
"His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready"
I have heard when a male Alien orgasm's, their cum is so precious (their race is dying out, every drop counts!) that if it fails to fertilise the female egg, it finds its way back into the males ball sack. That's why they have banned the euro style gang bangs. You end up going home with someone else's cum inside you, ewwww.
What have you heard Kitty?
Oh.. well I haven't heard as much as I have told people.. but that was a really interestig input Gav.
And I could take that in mind and use it when I think about liquid fluids the next time...
