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I have 12 stories out on Lush over the years. For the last few years, I have developed a writer's block and my drive to published has dried out. My most recent published story came from the heart and it was very long, and I was so happy to get it published here. My writer's block seems gone.
My heart is also in my next story, and it is also pretty long. It got rejected, rightfully, because it had many grammar punctuation problems. I fixed them using an online tool, but it was rejected again.
I am at the end of my wits.
Can a native speaker please check?
Please DM me.
Love, Lola