Alcove - Loaves

Quote by IMPURETHOUGHTS
At times.
Today while waiting in line to get the Lovables F-150 to pass the SMOG TEST.
A guy w/ a blk LA cap, blk crewneck sweater, blk w/ grey at the bottom semi tight sweat pants, blk socks and those hideous trypophobia looking ass clogs/slippers? Shoes? Idk
Omg are you talking about Yeezy foam runners? 😂
Quote by GJC1959
Hi, I’m looking for an editor to go over a story. I have submitted it twice. It comes back with, punctuation, making it flow, speech marks in the right place, layout and identifying who is talking. I have put a lot of time of time into this. Though I go through the process of changing it. The story never seems up to standard. I have read other people's stories to try and get an idea of what is required. But I must be missing something. This is my first attempt a writing.
I'd love to take a look and hopefully help my love