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LadyX
Over 90 days ago
Straight Female, 35
0 miles · Dallas

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Sometimes what seem like bad story ideas, really are bad story ideas. Your welcome for not subjecting Lush to mine.
You wouldn't believe the size of my story-idea graveyard. I think this is totally normal and healthy for a writer. Granted, a lack of confidence and/or writers block can result in more stories landing on the scrap heap. But, in general, I think most of us have an innate sense for whether a story's been accomplished to our personal satisfaction; and if it hasn't, then abandoning it at least for the time being is the right decision.
Come on my face, you bastard!! Do it!! COME ON MY FACE!!!!!!
"Too Close" by Alex Clare. Holy crap, this song is a severe beating, especially with its constant use in commercials for Microsoft (the post above reminded me of this one).
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Nike.com

A kid in my program earned a pair of cleats that's gonna cost me a grip, I've just designed them for him.


Couldn't be any bigger than the grip I just threw at some football tickets!
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narcissist & ignorant now that's just funny lol


I'll own the narcissism proudly, almost as proudly as your misogyny and wimpy identity. The ignorance...well, if that's how it looks from where you sit, then I'll happily stay ignorant. Lots of luck with your victim-card schtick.
Wonder why you're "ignorged"...couldn't be your no-balls, woman-hating approach to this site, would it? You're so sorry for yourself at the outset, on your page, etc. So, mission accomplished, captain. We think exactly what you want us to think about you, given the info you offer.
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I'm very intrigued by the laser hair removal though!


I can't recommend it highly enough.
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Wow, I knew people with a saggy, loose vagina could be so cruel to people who can't fill their bucket, because of an attitude problem,


Wait. You didn't used to work at Stiletto's Cabaret too, did you? Because I knew a few of those there.
Introduce the title of your story:

The Gangster's Girl

Genre/Category:

Interracial

Provide the link:

http://www.lushstories.com/stories/interracial/the-gangsters-girl-part-1.aspx
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/interracial/the-gangsters-girl-part-2.aspx


1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?


I was vacationing in Jamaica, and having been there a few times now, plus having read a lot about it, I feel I've begun to get a sense for the place. I've already written one story that's set there ("The Midnight Walk"), but something about the place captures my imagination. The culture there is full of contradiction: fatalistic yet vibrant, religious yet overtly sexual, violent yet beautiful. It's all so ripe for storytelling.

2. How did you come up with these characters?


I saw my main female character in the Montego Bay airport. The girl that I describe and flesh out: that was her, standing in line ahead of me, talking with the two obvious minions. And I thought to myself: "gangster girl." The story came to me quickly from there.

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?


Most if not all of my work has a dark undercurrent to it, and so I tried to mine it a little more overtly this time. It's not a period piece, but it very much attempts to be organic within a certain place. Also, instead of crafting a story around the sex, this one is very much story-first, and the sex happens where it happens; therefore, maybe it's not traditional erotica. Nevertheless, I like to think that I managed to infuse the story with a certain aura of sexuality throughout.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?

I'm not Jamaican, nor do I speak Patois. So I had to try to strike a balance between shamelessly and incompetently mimicking the phrasing of Jamaicans and just writing regular dialogue that could technically occur anywhere. I had to make the dialogue 'feel' like it's in keeping with the story's location.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?

If you like gritty crime stories, even a little bit, I think you'll like it. To me, brief sex stories are so much harder to pull off convincingly because context of the participants adds so much richness to their sexual identity. Two random people fucking? So what. On the other hand, if the reader is made privy to two characters' inner conflicts, unyielding wants, and sexual desires, isn't the actual sex so much more explosive and rich, if not necessarily 'meaningful'? That's what I attempt to do in my stories generally, and I feel this one is one of my better examples of richly rendered sexual tension and release.

Thank you to all who have read, voted, and commented! It means a lot to me.
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Spoken like a true narcissist


You might be 'ignorged', but at least you're perceptive.
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I've already seen that years ago when I came and found her ''experimenting'' with her co-workers


I'm guessing you were ignored in that scenario.
I use them all the time because they make the words flow more smoothly, often making the writing seem conversational. And unless the tone you're going for is more formal, then doing away with contractions can make the prose come off as a bit stilted.
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Oh and the smell I can recognise his scent.


That's what would tip me off. Assuming I could only feel his cock, and it wasn't different in size or shape, then the only thing that would give it away as different would be his scent.
Happy Birthday, Jack! You make this place so much more fun, and your friendship means much to me personally. Always stay you.

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When I first started working in a place of ill-repute, there was a woman there who had a "butt-pon". Her sphincter muscles no longer operated right, so she stuck tissue in her ass to prevent anal-leakage. This was an eye-opener for me. Nevertheless, I opened my ass for some anal sex some time later. Not gonna lie, it's not my favorite. But I wouldn't know unless I tried, right? So, spread those cheeks, Daisy. A good corn-holin' might suit you.

But this thread is about pure visuals, right? Oh yes. I never had a one night stand because a guy was fugly. Just saying. We need more than looks, for sure. But will a smokin-hot guy make my body stir? You bet your puckered ass it will.
Also, by the time I'm sufficiently attracted to him to know his cock is big, then the appearance is irrelevant too. Unless he flashes me LOL
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You say nothing of the kind of person he is. Based on looks, I wouldn't sleep with anybody. If I fancied him as a person, yes I would, no matter what the size of any part of him.


That's true. If he's an asshole with no charisma or otherwise redeeming qualities, then his overweight appearance is irrelevant anyway. It's when we get to the "hot" asshole that things get complicated (for me, anyway ).
I guess it doesn't grate on me because, as HotMama mentioned, people within that subculture prefer to capitalize. To me, this is similar to the capitalization of "Mister" or "Sir", or "Doctor": an addressed title.
Good question- I suppose I was thinking more "western", but high-quality is high-quality.
We have a member or two that either are attempting or have written graphic stories/comics. It got me to thinking about what a powerful medium it can be for erotica.

Does anyone here have experience reading graphic erotica novels, or erotic comics? If so, what are some of the better examples of titles and authors?

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Please, no linking to other sites. The last thing we need are links to a competitor or gross-out site. Also no explicit pictures, per the terms and conditions, even in cartoon form.

Thanks for any info that gets shared here!
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I'm heading to Home Depot this weekend for a cordless drill



Wow, that one's slow and right over the plate. Anyone gonna take a swing?

There are a few discussions of golden showers, just use the search function to find those threads. There are no pictures because unless it's merely implied and not actually shown, then illustrations of golden showers would break our terms and conditions, listed here.

And no, I'm not really into getting peed on or peeing on others, although I've done it.