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Nice question!

I took a look through my Favourite Stories list to see which titles jump out at me.

As someone else pointed out, Average Black Girl has a way with titles, especially poetry.

*Song of the Succubus* is a fine example.

I also seem to like titles that intrigue me or are evocative;

like LeCygneNoir's *Moanin'* which sums up the jazz age in which it was written

or

*Cake and Boobs* by PervyStoryTeller - who could resist a title like that!

In the same way, Sprite's sublime story *Would You Like Ketchup With That?* takes service and seduction to a whole new level!!

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Number 10
Valley of the Dolls - 30 million
Author: Jacqueline Susann
Not be confused with Russ Meyer's campy film Beyond the Valley of the Dolls , this novel, which was first published in 1966, was an instant hit. The plot centers around three women vying to make it in showbiz, who instead get plagued by sex, drugs and scandal. Pushing the boundaries of the '60s, it's undeniably a trashy melodrama but it is addictive and entertaining nonetheless.

Excerpt: "I don't need a woman on my arm every minute."


Number 9
In His Steps: What Would Jesus Do? - 30 million
Author: Rev. Charles Monroe Sheldon
Sheldon was an average American clergyman. However, it all changed when he published this tome in 1896, bringing him phenomenal fame and fortune. This discourse is about dilemmas and how we can use the Bible in everyday life, boiling Christianity down to its very essence. What Sheldon proposes is that we put ourselves in Jesus' shoes for every decision we make, that it's the only way to really exercise discipleship.

Excerpt: "I know that the hand of divine love in all this is leading me."


Number 8

A Message to Garcia - 40 million
Author: Elbert Hubbard
This 1899 short essay, clocking in at around 1,500 words, is about the real hero of the Cuban War. At its core, it is a dissertation on labor relations that still rings true today. It basically addresses workers and preaches initiative. It achieved these staggering sales figures mostly because companies would buy the book in bulk to distribute to their employees.

Excerpt: "My heart goes out to the man who does his work when the 'boss' is away, as well as when he is home."


Number 7

Dr. Spock's Baby and Child Care - 50 million
Author: Dr. Benjamin Spock
No Vulcans or warp speed, but the same good sense though. In 1946, pediatrician Spock penned this classic on how to raise children. Not only was the book important in its own right, it was also somewhat controversial considering a man wrote about what was traditionally considered a woman's task. This is the source that generations of parents have relied on when dealing with newborns and toddlers. It covers a wide range of topics relating to childcare, from infancy to early education.

Excerpt: "The fact is that child rearing is a long, hard job, the rewards are not always immediately obvious, the work is often undervalued, and parents are just as human and almost as vulnerable as their children."


Number 6

The McGuffey Readers - 60 million
Author: William Holmes McGuffey
The numerous editions of this anthology of short stories for young readers were quite popular when first printed in 1836, though they were initially rather preachy. Not only were they a great learning tool but they also contained valuable moral lessons. During the 19th century, 80% of all American schoolchildren used them. Some sources claim that 120 million copies were sold but it is believed that these figures are bloated considering the U.S. population numbered around 10 million at the time.

Excerpt: "The first object of the intelligent teacher, is to awaken the attention of his pupil."


Number 5

The World Almanac and Book of Facts (2003) - 73.5 million
Author: World Almanac Books
The world saw the apparition of this work in 1868 and it's been published every year since, except for a hiatus between 1876 and 1886 when ownership was in limbo. A comprehensive reference manual encompassing information on just about every subject, from sports and economy to history and geography, the World Almanac is a favorite of many. In 1923, Calvin Coolidge was sworn in as U.S. President by his Justice father who read the oath from a copy of this book.

Excerpt: "At the site where the World Trade Center had stood, the task of removing 1.62 million tons of rubble while searching for human remains officially ended July 15, 2002."


Number 4

Guinness World Records (2003) - 94 million
Author: Various Before flooding the Web and network TV specials, world records have fascinated millions through the famous book in its yearly edition. First published in 1955, the book is a repository of world records of all sorts, from sports heroics and eccentric feats to freaky human deformities. It came to be when the big boss of the Guinness brewery wanted to know what the fastest game bird in Europe was; he figured a book containing such facts might prove lucrative. The fact that it contains lots of photographs deeply appeals to the human voyeuristic hunger.
Excerpt: "The world's longest kiss took place in New York City, lasting a Guinness World Record 30 hours, 59 minutes, and 27 seconds."


Number 3

The American Spelling Book - 100 million
Author: Noah Webster
It was in 1783 that this famous book was first published. It soon became the preferred English textbook in schools through 19th-century America. The Blue-Back Speller 's charm was that words were broken down into syllables, which made it easier for students to learn pronunciation. The book was often revised and reedited by its author.

Excerpt: "The design of this Grammatical institute is to furnish schools in this country with an easy, accurate and comprehensive system of rules and lessons for teaching the English language."


Number 2

Quotations From Chairman Mao Tse-Tung - 900 million
Author: Mao Tse-Tung
Most people are more familiar with the book under its nickname: The Little Red Book . First published in 1966, it sheds light on the Chinese dictator's views on life, economics, and politics. Fairly poetic in style, Mao's fervent beliefs of the Communist ideology shine through.

Excerpt: "We should support whatever the enemy opposes and oppose whatever the enemy supports."


Number 1

The Holy Bible - 6 billion
Author: Various
Does it really surprise anyone? The Good Book, which is the foundation of Christianity, aside from Christ himself of course, was the first volume to be printed around 1450. Until then, the book had been hand-copied by patient monks and was only available to clerics and scholars. Gutenberg's new printing technique allowed missionaries to bring copies of the bible with them in their religious conversion quests. It has been printed in more than 2,000 languages and dialects so far.

Excerpt: "Don't forget to be kind to strangers. For some who have done this have entertained angels without realizing it."

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There are a lot of "she"s in writing. Sometimes, it can be too many. Remember I said that your readers like imagery? And we like to FEEL things? By putting the emotion or adverb, the way in which a thing is done or felt, it can raise the emotion and atmosphere for the next part of the story without taking away too much of the detail or more important matters.

Your sentence regarding who was behind the desk was a bit clunky, so I pared that down a little, and added that she was staring. otherwise, how do we know that's who was watching Karly? Maybe we don't, but the excuse she offers afterwards makes it seem like it was.

For Lush Stories, the generally accepted format of speech punctuation requires a new line when somebody who wasn't talking last, talks again. This helps readers who rely on computer screens to both keep their place, and not miss anything important that's said.

Finally, not everybody starts all their sentences with, "Oh". Well, some of us do. I use "Well" and "Anyway", even though I shouldn't. However, in a story, it takes away from the flow, and appears unnatural. Also, swearing and cursing can mean the same thing sometimes, and in this case, it keeps the sentence tidy. I also added in a little extra embarassment at the end, so the reader gets an image of Karly blushing with shining eyes, the way pretty ladies do sometimes.






I would suggest reading your story out loud to yourself. Print it out, and change the computer file as you go along. Reading it out loud can stop our mind reading what it WANTS to see, as opposed to what's there.

It also shows us when things seem a bit forced or unrealistic, especially in the dialogue. That's when getting a friend to read it with or for you can help too.




Tips for InnocentBliss87:

Slow down whilst writing, or do a really good read-through afterwards to get rid of broken sentences, grammar and punctuation problems.

Read the story out loud to find mistakes, repetition and awkwardness.

Spend time looking through the "Essential Reading" part of the forum. It will save time later, trust me! If a story is rejected, odds on, you will probably be directed here or to similar resources. https://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_topics32_Essential-Reading.aspx

Spend a few minutes trying to "see" your characters in your head, their looks, their feelings, their emotions, surroundings, noises. This will help you create a picture for your readers, if you can include words and images that create the same world you can see in your head.

Don't give up! For some, writing is easy (knobheads). For others, it is a seemingly never-ending slog. However, with enough hard work and perseverance, I have never yet seen anybody fail, who kept trying.

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if you open up the popular tab, you will see that it has 3 different subsections - this month, last month, and all time. that might be more of what you were looking for?