Introduce the title of your story: Adrenalin
Genre/Category: Oral Sex
Provide the link: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/oral-sex/adrenalin.aspx
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
This story was published as part of the Lush Summer anthology on Amazon a couple of years ago. I previously had a teaser posted on site, but Nicola recently asked if I and the other contributing authors wouldn’t mind releasing the whole thing here on Lush. So here we are.
As for the story itself, I wanted to take a look at how two people who have a really close relationship, but otherwise shouldn’t be together, might cross that line with each other after an unusual shared experience. In this case, a pair of marine park divers who have a brush with a great white shark.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
George is an amalgam of a couple of women from my life in an attempt to create the coolest chick I could. Drawing from a petite ex-, I took her fierce intellect and highly capable physicality, together with her maturity and the genuine warmth that lay just beneath her sometimes-intimidating exterior. Combining those qualities with the wickedly filthy sense of humour and lifelong bond I share with my current best mate, I had the perfect female character.
The male character is loosely based on me, in another self-indulgent exercise. His backstory as an ex-special forces soldier gives him the necessary skills to keep up with George, and the mettle to face off with the great white shark. But the core of his character, and the heart of the story, is how the adrenalin rush from the encounter throws him off balance. This similarly confident operator becomes racked with doubt and uncertainty in the aftermath, leaving him very much vulnerable.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
In addition to just being an oral sex story, this one’s an incredibly slow burn. I originally thought it’d be all done and dusted in a cheeky four or five thousand words. But by the time I finished, I was approaching eleven thousand. I certainly think the payoff is worth it, and there’s just as much fun to be had in the lead up. Still, I’m surprised it took me so long to get there.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Capturing the tension in the encounter with the shark was a lot more difficult than I expected. I of course needed to ratchet up the fear and suspense, but I also needed to pace it right. I didn’t want this to be a Jaws knock off. It was hard to keep the shark from stealing the show. It’s merely the catalyst for the two of them to have an encounter of their own.
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
This is just one of many amazing stories in the Lush Summer anthology. Buz, Poppet, MollyDoll, Jimmy Starling, Liz, Pervystoryteller and the long lost SITTING/papergirl all have smoking hot contributions to it as well. It’s still available on Amazon, so pick yourself up a copy if you haven’t already
And it’s still worth remembering that more people are killed by vending machines each year than sharks. Just sayin’...
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Wilful
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All 4 Love by Color Me Bad
That's right. I danced with my son to it in the kitchen. He just wanted to push the microwave buttons though. Tough crowd...
That's right. I danced with my son to it in the kitchen. He just wanted to push the microwave buttons though. Tough crowd...
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Quote by Meggsy
One - Place your hand around it and hold and stroke it gently.
Two -lower your lips and mouth over it - slide your mouth down the length till its comfortable in your mouth. Begin stroking him with your lips.
Three - let your tongue loose and rub it over the crown and around the rim.
Four - You are now in the best position whether it be on the bed or on your knees.
Five - Let nature take it course and enjoy.
Six - devour the product you have encouraged him to produce for you - with relish and make him happy.
Seven - Kiss him and hope that he will return the pleasure for you.
Based on that, I'm going to say standing above or lying beneath Meggsy. Damn...
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Quote by sasnak
By #, which of the 7 activities have you accomplished? Protected sex is allowed to be counted.
1. Cum in a woman's pussy
2. Cum in a woman's ass
3. Cum in a woman's mouth
4. Cum in a man's mouth
5. Cum in a man's ass
6. Have a man cum in your mouth
7. Have a man cum in your ass
Yes to 1 and 3. I'm up for 2 and have even given it a go, but slipped back to 3 for the finish. I've got no real interest in 4 through 7, although I'd be lying if I didn't say I've been curious from time to time.
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I've just finished The Barefoot Investor: The Only Money Guide You'll Ever Need by Scott Pape. Absolute must reading for any Aussies just starting out, or of course, short of a coin. Good principles for everyone else too, but the specific financial product and taxation advice may not be applicable.
And now I'm starting The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo by Stieg Larsson.
And now I'm starting The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo by Stieg Larsson.
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Introduce the title of your story: Kiss Chasey
Genre/Category: First Time
Provide the link: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/kiss-chasey.aspx
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
I’ve been gagging to collaborate on a story with someone for ages now. Browncoffee and I were casually messaging each other about stories and ice cream and music, when we struck a chord over a shared love for a particular artist. In a none too cowardly approach, I innocently suggested that The Chainsmokers’ Closer (which gets a shout out in the story) lent itself nicely to a collaboration, with two people picking over the wreckage of their long lost relationship until they rekindle a spark. She took the bait and agreed to write something with me, instead mentioning another song she liked as the idea for a story she always wanted to have a crack at. I gave it a look, and bam! It pretty much wrote itself.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
These are perhaps two of the most subtle characters I’ve ever come up with, noting that they’re just as much Hannah’s creations as mine. I had a daughter of a friend of mine in mind when writing Cassie – grounded, mature, determined. Of course, Browncoffee brought the authenticity to her with that rambling inner monologue she does so well, really bringing her to life in a way I never could.
Blake’s that Mr Perfect who can do no wrong. Guys want to be him, girls want to do him. But underneath that façade, there’s something darker. He’s flawed and imperfect, which actually makes him interesting. Hannah really opened that up during the tennis court scene, which I think develops his character beautifully. It’s a shame we didn’t have more space to really run with that.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
This one’s first person from the female point of view, which was a bit of a stretch for me. You know, since I have a penis.
And of course, it’s a collaboration with the immensely-talented Browncoffee. I’ve never written a story with someone else before, which was actually a lot of fun.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Bridging the 10,000 miles between us was actually easier than I thought it was going to be. In the tick tacking back and forth, we only wrote the same scene at the same time once. But even then, we were able to blend it together so nothing was wasted.
The hardest part, as is always the case with me, the wheels fell off a thousand words from the end. We were racing along at quite a nice pace, but all of a sudden, we both got lazy. That’s probably a little unfair. Our lives swamped us and we just couldn’t find the time. It took us longer to write those last few hundred words than it did to write the rest of the story.
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
Part of the deal in getting Hannah to agree to write a story with me was that she could choose a new avatar for me. She’s not a fan of the donkey. So as much as it pains me, I have to regretfully announce the imminent retirement of Eeyore. The end of an era that comes with no small amount of sadness. Goodbye, Little Buddy.
Genre/Category: First Time
Provide the link: https://www.lushstories.com/stories/first-time/kiss-chasey.aspx
1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?
I’ve been gagging to collaborate on a story with someone for ages now. Browncoffee and I were casually messaging each other about stories and ice cream and music, when we struck a chord over a shared love for a particular artist. In a none too cowardly approach, I innocently suggested that The Chainsmokers’ Closer (which gets a shout out in the story) lent itself nicely to a collaboration, with two people picking over the wreckage of their long lost relationship until they rekindle a spark. She took the bait and agreed to write something with me, instead mentioning another song she liked as the idea for a story she always wanted to have a crack at. I gave it a look, and bam! It pretty much wrote itself.
2. How did you come up with these characters?
These are perhaps two of the most subtle characters I’ve ever come up with, noting that they’re just as much Hannah’s creations as mine. I had a daughter of a friend of mine in mind when writing Cassie – grounded, mature, determined. Of course, Browncoffee brought the authenticity to her with that rambling inner monologue she does so well, really bringing her to life in a way I never could.
Blake’s that Mr Perfect who can do no wrong. Guys want to be him, girls want to do him. But underneath that façade, there’s something darker. He’s flawed and imperfect, which actually makes him interesting. Hannah really opened that up during the tennis court scene, which I think develops his character beautifully. It’s a shame we didn’t have more space to really run with that.
3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?
This one’s first person from the female point of view, which was a bit of a stretch for me. You know, since I have a penis.
And of course, it’s a collaboration with the immensely-talented Browncoffee. I’ve never written a story with someone else before, which was actually a lot of fun.
4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?
Bridging the 10,000 miles between us was actually easier than I thought it was going to be. In the tick tacking back and forth, we only wrote the same scene at the same time once. But even then, we were able to blend it together so nothing was wasted.
The hardest part, as is always the case with me, the wheels fell off a thousand words from the end. We were racing along at quite a nice pace, but all of a sudden, we both got lazy. That’s probably a little unfair. Our lives swamped us and we just couldn’t find the time. It took us longer to write those last few hundred words than it did to write the rest of the story.
5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?
Part of the deal in getting Hannah to agree to write a story with me was that she could choose a new avatar for me. She’s not a fan of the donkey. So as much as it pains me, I have to regretfully announce the imminent retirement of Eeyore. The end of an era that comes with no small amount of sadness. Goodbye, Little Buddy.
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Congrats, Browncoffee! I didn't know you won. I've only been writing a story with you for the last month! 
And of course, a big congratulations to the other runners up and everyone else who entered. I love the filthy stuff, and I can't wait to work my way through the entries.
And of course, a big congratulations to the other runners up and everyone else who entered. I love the filthy stuff, and I can't wait to work my way through the entries.
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I just collaborated with Browncoffee on Kiss Chasey.
It was a lot of fun to write with such a talented author. We have such different writing styles, and blending them together I think made for a really interesting process. I learned a lot.
It was so exciting to open up the email every day or so and see how our story had grown overnight. Of course, it helped tremendously that neither of us were particularly precious about what we'd written, not that either of us really stomped on each other's work.
I loved it, and I'd love to do it again.
It was a lot of fun to write with such a talented author. We have such different writing styles, and blending them together I think made for a really interesting process. I learned a lot.
It was so exciting to open up the email every day or so and see how our story had grown overnight. Of course, it helped tremendously that neither of us were particularly precious about what we'd written, not that either of us really stomped on each other's work.
I loved it, and I'd love to do it again.
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I'm also Wilful over there.
I tried my hand at a sample chapter of a thriller novel I had in mind, called Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star. I'd love it if you'd check it out and let me know what you think.
I tried my hand at a sample chapter of a thriller novel I had in mind, called Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star. I'd love it if you'd check it out and let me know what you think.
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Just watched the doco, I am Jane Doe, on Netflix. Damn, America. What the fuck?
And I really enjoyed War Machine with Brad Pitt. He played it brilliantly. You can't just talk the talk, you actually have to walk the walk. I'll have to check out the book now to see how that version played out. Fascinating stuff.
And I really enjoyed War Machine with Brad Pitt. He played it brilliantly. You can't just talk the talk, you actually have to walk the walk. I'll have to check out the book now to see how that version played out. Fascinating stuff.
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A bookshelf full of cookbooks. But by virtue of the angle, it's Hands Across the Kitchen, a charity cookbook to raise money for tsunami and AIDS orphans in Thailand. 50 of Australia's top chefs donated their favourite childhood recipes for it. The banana cake is pretty bloody good. Just sayin'...
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Oh good, it's been a while since Dancing Doll won something around here. Umm... can we ban her this time please? Or maybe tie her up in a dungeon somewhere... Hey, this thing writes itself!
And only 6,000 words? You're killing me! I just dusted off my stalled hardcore entry from a couple years ago and it's already 3,500 to get up to the good bit. I'll see what I can do, but I fear I'll have to go off-comp. The shit I'm about to do to those girls... 2,500 isn't going to be enough. Hmmm...
And only 6,000 words? You're killing me! I just dusted off my stalled hardcore entry from a couple years ago and it's already 3,500 to get up to the good bit. I'll see what I can do, but I fear I'll have to go off-comp. The shit I'm about to do to those girls... 2,500 isn't going to be enough. Hmmm...
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I want to see Eddie the Eagle. I've always had a thing for ski jumping and underdog stories, even though I know he gets beaten like a redheaded stepchild.
War Dogs looks good too, and only a few more days before it's on Foxtel.
And Eye in the Sky as well. A mate said it built the tension brilliantly, so I'm looking forward to it.
War Dogs looks good too, and only a few more days before it's on Foxtel.
And Eye in the Sky as well. A mate said it built the tension brilliantly, so I'm looking forward to it.