i appericate all the veiws on our poem, It was written for my Daddy/Dom as a show of my love and affection..The scoring is just a a extra bonus, I DO NOT WRITE TO BE SCORED, As you know i am not a writer so this will probally be my only Love Poem i will ever write..There are alot of awesome writers on here , i would rather read than write..But huggs and thank you all for the Read, huggs deana
Twinkle Twinkle little star, look how naughty you really are! Up above the sky to high Only coming down with a sigh what will you do in a bed meant for two. you giggle and laugh and say" I AM DAISY DOO", what can i do with this angel so bright i dont know if you will get out of bed to nite....Happy Birthday
spot on you nail it arlene..I LOVE IT>>>IT''S SO TRUE................ huggs
whats better than giving and receiving oral...It would be One of my favorites....yummy
how to live down under..................
Phoney...................