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Over 90 days ago
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In-House Sapiosexual
“Everything stays a little bit”
A little bit of coffee in my cup
A little bit of blue in my sky
A little bit of pain in my chest
A little bit of you in my heart
Goodbye my friend Alan.
RIP "Dirty Martini"
A little bit of coffee in my cup
A little bit of blue in my sky
A little bit of pain in my chest
A little bit of you in my heart
Goodbye my friend Alan.
RIP "Dirty Martini"
In-House Sapiosexual
Congratulations Margot.
A well deserved award for your acts of love and kindness.
A well deserved award for your acts of love and kindness.
In-House Sapiosexual
Alan was a hell of a person and a solid force of pure encouragement to all that he met. I am going to miss him so much. We argued all the time and I loved him for it. He was a dedicated poet and fought for poets, fought for the safety of your work.
I'm grieving. I practically exchanged with him everyday.
I knew he had some serious health issues that he down played. He never complained. I was not expecting this. He did let me win our last argument. He gave up the last word. I should have known then.
I'm grieving. I practically exchanged with him everyday.
I knew he had some serious health issues that he down played. He never complained. I was not expecting this. He did let me win our last argument. He gave up the last word. I should have known then.
In-House Sapiosexual
Hey you, body, don't I take care of you more than just a little "well"?! I pamper you and present you with only the best. I work you out hard and delight you with exquisite play. Not only that, I won't allow you to be mistreated by any one, anywhere. And, you are going to do me like that?
Get straight.
"Ain't nobody got time fo'dat."
Get straight.
"Ain't nobody got time fo'dat."
In-House Sapiosexual
Congratulations to the winners as well as the runner-ups. You guys did an amazing job. All of you. And, hats off to all of those bold enough to compete. It truly was an excellent competition and produced many wonderful stories.
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In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by TrinityX
All of my stories are true, so when I reflect on the sex...
I want to be in one of your stories...
I generally just word play with my theme. What's the major emotional issue or philosophy behind the storyline? (Or, at least what I hope it is.) I just try and keep it simple. I wish I could help. I'm pretty boring.
In-House Sapiosexual
One of my sexy favs just posted an audio to an already favorited poem. It's pantie melting y'all. His voice is delicious and his art is beautiful. Give it some time and your ear. You will not regret it.
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https://www.lushstories.com/stories/erotic-poems/angel-whore-renaissance.aspx
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https://www.lushstories.com/stories/erotic-poems/angel-whore-renaissance.aspx
In-House Sapiosexual
Mmm...I just love your coffee.
You're truly a talented barista.
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You're truly a talented barista.
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In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by Ping
Peacefulness of snow
Falling outside my window
Silent purity
Missed this. ❤️
In-House Sapiosexual
In its profoundness
The art of Haiku shines
Talent not a must
I'll stand and applaud
I know pea-cocks need love too
Sad is a failed Stud
Every word shared
Can be appreciated
Not every fool
Words can upset boys
But real men know their names
And when to respond
The fun is in words
A quickness to the defense
Reveals no humor
In repose, stop, think
Not every poem is you
Except those that are
This door I must close
No more thoughts of love to spare
My job is done here
The art of Haiku shines
Talent not a must
I'll stand and applaud
I know pea-cocks need love too
Sad is a failed Stud
Every word shared
Can be appreciated
Not every fool
Words can upset boys
But real men know their names
And when to respond
The fun is in words
A quickness to the defense
Reveals no humor
In repose, stop, think
Not every poem is you
Except those that are
This door I must close
No more thoughts of love to spare
My job is done here
In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by Emerson501
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I was beginning to wonder if it was only me.
In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by patokl
Sometimes someone comes
And writes not words but beauty
That takes breath away
Kisses
In-House Sapiosexual
I don't know why 1st time writers gravitate to first person. I'll share this advice given to me once because it still makes me laugh. If you choose to write in first person, make sure that person is interesting and has a special insight or talent for telling that specific story. Nothing is worse than having to listen to some boring ass person tell you a story. It can dull the most exciting of stories.
In-House Sapiosexual
It's demandatory. Besides if I f do bother to wear anything, I'll either slip out of it in my sleep or it gets removed.
In-House Sapiosexual
NEW*NEW*NEW*NEW*NEW
It's bold, it's raw...and it's me...sometimes.
I started off with the thought of how my poetry is. Some don't have the taste for it all. I kind of take all the rules and say "excuse me but..." I play with form, but mind you it's nothing I've never seen before (for example: It's Not Easy Being A Girl...Sometimes which is a common sound and response form in AA Lit). So, I'm thinking I should start sounding more bibliophylific (??)...
See what happened?! Check it out. Tell me what you think.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/erotic-poems/love-in-extremes.aspx
It's bold, it's raw...and it's me...sometimes.
I started off with the thought of how my poetry is. Some don't have the taste for it all. I kind of take all the rules and say "excuse me but..." I play with form, but mind you it's nothing I've never seen before (for example: It's Not Easy Being A Girl...Sometimes which is a common sound and response form in AA Lit). So, I'm thinking I should start sounding more bibliophylific (??)...
See what happened?! Check it out. Tell me what you think.
https://www.lushstories.com/stories/erotic-poems/love-in-extremes.aspx
In-House Sapiosexual
We are the dancers
The rhythm, music, and poem
In perpetuum
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Art by @zim2918 ❤️
The rhythm, music, and poem
In perpetuum
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Art by @zim2918 ❤️
In-House Sapiosexual
One word: Relax. Writers like Sprite are not trying to be impressive, they are concentrating on telling a great story. Telling sex is no differrent. My advice is simply based on my own personal preferences, as I'm sure everyone's is. When I read other writers, I know when they are trying too hard to be "sexy"--rushing it or they have what I label "porn envy". Relax and concentrate on your characters, not on you or your readers. Sex is unique to the individual, if you have created an interesting character (and have at least fully developed them in your head) the scene is going to reveal itself. Let them do and go after what develops and strengthens the story. Other than that, the same writing goals apply as with the entire work, "show don't tell," etc... Don't chase readers by creating what you feel will be popular. I generally find those obvious, amusingly awkward and predictable as a reader. But, like I share on my bio, if you're looking for a quick stroke then I'm not your writer. I'm writing stories highlighted by the sex, not just concentrating on the sex. If your goal is stroke lit, my advice probably won't work. The response to my erotic scenes are pretty good. A lot of readers say that it felt real or like they were actually experiencing the scene. That's what I enjoy when I read and therefore my goal when I write. Of course I want to do better, so threads like this are wonderful. I enjoy seeing what works for others.
In-House Sapiosexual
I think I've congratulated you everywhere but here.
You rock chick!! You did an excellent job. I'll have to check you out on Goodreads.
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You rock chick!! You did an excellent job. I'll have to check you out on Goodreads.
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In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by Jen
When the wind whispers
And the rain catches my tears
I will remember
Very nice.
In-House Sapiosexual
I missed your birthday. I'm sorry beautiful.
I should have known we were right along in there together.
I have an excuse, I was hungover from my own. LOL.
I should have known we were right along in there together.
I have an excuse, I was hungover from my own. LOL.
In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by patokl
We'll never agree on that! ☺
Average is fun. It takes all the pressure off. I'll have to tell you how I came upon that name. You will roll on the floor laughing.
In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by Ping
Sadly, this is how my mind works. And now, the same for both of my kids. Your mind, on the other hand... What A Treat!
My grandma, as many probably have, said don't tell people how good your are. If you are good, people will tell you.
EVERYONE knows how good you are.rxyquNEH5IY0fAQ0 And they have clearly told you by your well-deserved success. But not everyone knows
how GREAT you are... but they will. That is why a thread like this is needed.
Such a treat to have you around to lead us into libidinous temptation. A true privilege. Thank you for sharing yourself with us! G
Wow, this really moves me. I don't know what to say. Honestly.
It makes me feel so good. I wanted somewhere to talk about writing and specifically writing erotica. There is like this void where serious conversation about trying to do it right should be. That inspires me. This thread is sort of a plea for help. Read me, yes--but let's do more. I was going through a major "why am I doing this" stage in writing. And I know it's a vanity thread and what that implies to many. But, I want to talk about what my friends and readers are doing and thinking too. I want to learn and help where I can. We put a lot of time and thought into what we share. It seems sad sometimes that it leaves the front page and just disipates. Inside of us as writers, it stays with us. Writing about relationships, including all aspects of it includes sexuality. It's not smut, which is a popular term with my work peers. There is no place better than Lush to do it.
Thank you for this.
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In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by sweetsinner
I absolutely adore your introduction to the story as you have written it here. Fiction captures that admiration and respect you have so phenomenally well, and it avoids the overwhelming eye-rolling stereo types that a newbie (me) might normally avoid. It's an absolutely captivating story from start to finish. Thank you for sharing you talent and your creative insight with us. I loved it.
You know, I almost didn't put that story on here. But I'm glad that I did. It's a favorite and it makes me feel really good that you enjoyed it. People seem to be more drawn to the sensationalized stuff. I'm in awe of how it "feels", if that makes any sense.
In-House Sapiosexual
Quote by Simmerdownchick
I could never forget you! Love the copywrite on your name
Awe, thank you. ?
The copyright is like a serious hint. LOL I still get majorly plagiarized though.
In-House Sapiosexual
Hmm...
Finds a seat in a hidden corner to watch the crowd.
So this is where all the cool people hang out.
Finds a seat in a hidden corner to watch the crowd.
So this is where all the cool people hang out.
In-House Sapiosexual
That stuff requires way too much math. I'm a true product of the humanities department.