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cethpada
4 hours ago
Straight Male, 56
0 miles · Newcastle upon Tyne
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Think it depends on what I am doing. If I have time on my hands then yes I will look at women and admire and appreciate them. Don't picture them naked or having sex, I also have a thing about clothes so quite often I will be looking at their outfit. The day you stop appreciating beautiful things is the day you die.
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My workouts fit around my work, during the week I go after work arriving at the gym at around 1730hrs each day. My workouts vary between weights and aerobic workouts on alternative days. On a Saturday I go to the gym first thing in the morning and do a long aerobic workout.
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Quote by resurrected
France looks like a clear favourite of the teams remaining IMO. I think if Croatia beat Russia they will also take England who I think will take Sweden.
But that ref in the Belgium - Brazil game. Holy fuck. 2 pretty clear penalties overlooked for Brazil as well as Fergie time. Ludicrous
If Neymar had stayed on his feet a bit more in other games then the refs might be more inclined to give fouls against him as it is most of the media have castigated the refs for being fooled by his dives and play acting so are now getting tougher. The further into the competition teams go the better and more stronger minded refs are chosen and so his antics were less likely to work.
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Stories that are entirely dialog-driven can be very effective. I've never written one which was all dialog, although I have written some which rely heavily on it to move the story forward. Of course, I've also never managed to write anything as short as 1,000 words.
I'm not sure how you could effectively do 1,000 words with no dialog tags or attribution at all; I'd almost have to see it to understand what you're trying to accomplish. You don't need them every line, of course (please don't!) or even every time you change speakers, but as it goes back and forth for that long it seems like the reader will lose track at some point unless some characteristic of the dialog/speech itself defines the character.
An interesting concept, but to me it seems like you'd need something, at least occasionally, to avoid confusion. As an author, you know that the constant 'he said'/'she said' repetition is painfully redundant, and you know to use alternative devices such as 'He nodded...', or 'She shrugged, smiling...', or "He sighed heavily before replying...' or more complex forms to define the speaker for the reader. There are many, many ways to do that.
Still, might be interesting to give it a try. Thinking a little outside the box can produce some intriguing results.
It was just a silly humorous idea which came to me one evening as I was driving home from work. Part of the idea is that at the start you don't know what these characters are and the reveal happens as the conversation goes on.
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Is it possible to follow the story without attributives?. Wouldn't I get the conversation mixed up at times without the insertion of at least some attributes?.
I have read stories where attributes are inserted at certain times just to help a reader keep 'on track'. But I don't have a definitive answer to your question. Hope you find a solution that satisfies without spoiling.
That is exactly my point when I wrote it I used a different coloured font to keep me on track as even I was finding it difficult ensuring that the response was in keeping with the way I had developed the character.
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We were at a house party and eventually an orgy developed in one room. When I finished realised my wife was not in the room, found her in another room with a guy from a couple we had swapped with many times. I stayed to watched it was extremely arousing to watch him pound her. It sounds strange but I had not actually properly watched her getting fucked before because I was usually busy myself.
