Hey there,
I'm the Mod who verified your first story. I took a good look at the edits I placed. I added some commas after introductory phrases, edited some dialogue punctuation to be consistent with our standards and corrected the odd verb that was in the wrong tense. In my opinion, these were necessary edits for the sake of grammatical correctness.
If you feel I've altered your story too much, I'll gladly go through my edits with you. Just let me know.
Cheers,
Henke
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Cheesy Alchemist
Quote by Liz
Hydrofluoric acid in a 50-gallon acrylic barrel
- Hydrofluoric acid is toxic and corrosive, but actually isn't that strong of an acid compared to other hydrohalic acids; the fluorine has a very good orbital overlap with hydrogen and is also not very polarisable, therefore it resists donating its proton, unlike other hydrohalic acids which are good proton donators. It will break down some tissues, but it will take a relatively long time and won't turn the entire body into stuff that can be rinsed down the drain. Hydrochloric acid is a much stronger acid, and as it has several uses from pH-balancing pool water to preparing concrete surfaces, it's available by the gallon from any hardware store. However, it isn't very good at dissolving bodies either; while it will eventually work by breaking down the connective tissues, it will make a huge stink and take several days to dissolve certain types of tissues and bones.
Someone DID do their chemistry homework! I'm pretty impressed.
As far as I know, in their golden days, the mafia used hot concentrated potassium perchlorate (KClO4). That's a pretty darn strong base and an excellent oxidizer. It oxidizes pretty much everything it gets its unimaginable load of electronegativity onto. You will oxidize any biological tissue so much you can't even tell this soup used to be biology while (relatively) strong acids like HCl will have a hard time dealing with bones, teeth, nails, hair et cetera. Also, HCl can be very dangerous, especially in such quantities. KClO4 is a safe-to-handle powder and can just be added to the barrel of hot water.
But if you're insisting on acid, why not go for the real bad molecules (the ones that make sulfuric acid look like a "weak" acid). Take fluorosulfuric acid or fluoroantimonic acid. It won't get much more acidic than that.
Cheesy Alchemist
Rach...? Who is Rach? Never heard of her 
Nah, just kidding. I'm just jealous of y'all who try to sneak a bit of her attention while I'm off the grid for a few more days. I shouldn't be that hard on her. I mean, Mistress Sprite does need her sugar, right? And now that she can't have her most favoritest boytoy, I can't be mad at her for having a full-on fuckfest. I'd do just the same.
So here's to you, Mistress Sprite. To a fantastic person, an awesome Mod and a great friend. Sometimes, I'm really jealous of your wits and how smart you are and that's just one more reason to love you.
"Si ton mari est si docile, c'est qu tu sais, probablement, pour le faire tenir tranquile, te servir d'arguments frappants." That ring a bell to anyone?
Nah, just kidding. I'm just jealous of y'all who try to sneak a bit of her attention while I'm off the grid for a few more days. I shouldn't be that hard on her. I mean, Mistress Sprite does need her sugar, right? And now that she can't have her most favoritest boytoy, I can't be mad at her for having a full-on fuckfest. I'd do just the same.
So here's to you, Mistress Sprite. To a fantastic person, an awesome Mod and a great friend. Sometimes, I'm really jealous of your wits and how smart you are and that's just one more reason to love you.
"Si ton mari est si docile, c'est qu tu sais, probablement, pour le faire tenir tranquile, te servir d'arguments frappants." That ring a bell to anyone?
This is... I'm speechless...
Cheesy Alchemist
Here's an easy guide to comma rules with great examples:
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/
Cheesy Alchemist
I'll try my luck with 256, which is 4 to the 4, and 4 is my favorite digit (don't ask for any rational reasons. Just try it with rhythm or with counting your steps while you walk. Your first attempt will always be to count "packages" of 4 steps).
So let's hope 256 will do!
So let's hope 256 will do!
