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jaded_buddha
Over 90 days ago
Straight Cis Male
0 miles · Olympia

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I thought it was a fetish when the arousal or attraction was to something that wasn't inherently sexual. Genitals, breasts, etc., are inherently sexual. Feet, shoes, underwear are not inherently sexual.

And I think preference just has to do with degrees. "I prefer redheads, but blondes or brunettes are great, too," is obviously a preference. But "I can only get off on redheads," points more toward fetish.

Could be wrong, though.
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I vote that competitors provide their own score updates and can lie blatantly if they choose to ?


In that case, I took the lead last Wednesday with three 1 votes and a 2. Catch me if you can...
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i will look into doing updates. i know we did them for the attention whore contest. if we can for this one, we will. smile


Cool! I think it could be fun.
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Great point.

Will the scores be hidden until the deadline?

Do they need to be? Possibly.

Admin usually scrutinizes the votes/scoring prior to making them public. I suspect this will happen again, so a ‘real-time’ leaderboard is probably not going to happen. But I could be wrong.

Not knowing the numbers until the results does add some intrigue.


True, it might not be feasible for any number of good reasons. But it might keep people engaged in the contest all the way through. OTOH, it's possible someone could jump out to an insurmountable lead and take all the drama away... might be talking myself out of the idea... lol
This is a great idea.

Since winning is based on scores/votes this time, it'd be cool to see a "real-time" leaderboard. And by "real-time" I guess I mean occasionally-but-regularly updated. No idea how hard that would be to automate.
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I thought that was you spying from behind the door!


Well, that was always a safe bet!
Well deserved! Superbly understated and subtle, yet heartbreakingly satisfying. Congratulations, Hannah, and thank you for the wonderful story!
Huge congrats to all the participants and especially the three winners! It looks like my reading queue just got a little longer. I'm looking forward to catching up!
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She’s killed for less.


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Shush! No need to scare the man. Even if it's true...


So the rumors are true! *...glances over shoulder...*
Thank you everyone for the kind words, and thank you to the panel for the award! I'm pleased that the story has found an audience, and beyond pleased to have landed amongst such a great group of encouraging, supportive readers and fellow writers! Er, although, apparently Hannah wants me offed, now... how worried about that should I be?

Thanks again, everyone!

JB
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You mean like to show how shallow they are? I'm intrigued.


Potentially, sure! But yeah, if a male narrator (for example) notices a woman’s nail polish color or the freckles on her collarbone before he notices her 36DDs, I think that reveals at least a little something about him.

But you’re right- if he notices her 36DDs before he notices the fact that she’s crying alone at a bus stop, that sure would reveal something else!
Unless a physical characteristic is somehow essential to either the story or to a character’s motivation, I try to keep it minimal. To Sprite’s excellent third point, people will bring their own sense of who-they-want-to-see to the story. Eroticism happens between the ears, so let it!

You can also reveal a lot by describing action. Do they flit or do they stride? If a female character “skipped lightly across the rocks,” I know we’re not talking about some 6’4” Amazon lady. I tend to picture a spritely (heh,) tomboyish girl. If it was a male character, I’d picture a wiry, acrobatic guy.

And one upside to first person is that you can use physical descriptions of other characters to reveal more about your narrator.
I've fucked the boss on more than one occasion. Of course, I'm self-employed...
Public Service Announcement: laceburn is a real thing. Proceed with caution.
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Wow. That's a stunning pic


Thanks! Nature did all the hard work for that one. I just had to look up! smile
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Also, I knew jaded buddha before he was famous, just saying. smile


And I knew browncoffee before I knew she was already famous. :)
Wow, I’m floored! But grateful and very happy to be in such good company. Congrats to all the participants, and a big thanks to the judges for doing a very difficult job!
INFP sounds right, but “mediator” feels... off.

Also, I am apparently a woodland princess, which is obviously spot on.

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I'm not sure when Gav will be able to get to this, so I've set an artificial deadline on the software side, for the 2nd August. The actual deadline is 31st July.

Hopefully this is fixed for the next comp.


Successfully submitted! Thanks to all for the assistance!
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It looks as though Gav's code fix hasn't worked.

I'll give him a nudge.

Apologies! Your entry will be included one way or another, rest assured.


Thank you for the quick and helpful reply! Just let me know if I can do anything on my end to help!
Trying to submit to the latest competition, but I'm not seeing the "competition section" or "relevant button" as described on the competition info page:

"There is a competition section added to the Story Submission page beneath the usual story categories. Please make sure you check the relevant button, otherwise your story will not be entered into the competition."

Am I just going blind/crazy? (Totally possible) Or has it been removed already? I realize today's the deadline, but the competition is still marked as open, so...

Any help at all would be greatly appreciated!

Thanks!

-JB
It’s not an in-person thing, but you might want to take a look at xruniversity.com. They have a ton of free (and lengthy) instructional videos of different scenes with a Dom and a Domme talking about what they’re doing, how to safely do it, what to watch out for, etc. They also have a BDSM 101 section with some other resources.

If you’re near a major city, check out the local dungeons or sex shops to see if they might have classes or workshops.

Have fun and best of luck!
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This should hopefully be sorted now. Gav has fiddled with an algorithm. God, I love that man. He can fiddle with my algorithms any day of the week


Nice! Thank you! I wish great happiness for you and your algorithms.
Cut it down to 998 and it went through no problem. My theory? It counts the title. Mine has a one word title, which would have pushed 999 over the limit. No idea, though.

Thanks to all who answered!
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It's been like that for years. The closest I've ever gotten is 998.

Look for contractions - I have to I've, I will to I'll, he had, to he'd - stuff like that. Chances are you'll save a few words that way and make the cut.

Best of luck!


Good advice! Thank you!