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kkikkiriccio
1 week ago
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I get bored using "cock" and "pussy" all the time. So I wrote a few Victorian Era stories and googled "1800s sex slang" and happily found new words like "cunny", "qwim", "pisser", and my fav "twiddle-diddles" to use.
Good comment, thanks! I find myself not so much with words, but phrases, not trying to say the same things in all my stories, but changing things up!
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... I never plan out my stories and just write them on the cuff. I giggle and crack up while I write them.
Hugs,
Mysteria
I'm kind of the opposite. I think long and hard (pun intended?) about how the scene plays out, and end up editing a bunch as I got.
But giggling and cracking up, for sure! It's all about having fun for me, or fantasizing about fun, sometimes silly, situations.
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Just remembered my series involves real-time events. So films/tv programmes etc match up to the same as on that date, at that time. I actually use real dates which correspond to that day in that year too. With my story currently being in 2005, all music references etc are checked too...
I do the exact same thing... And I often have a calendar open as I am writing to make sure I get dates right. Also sources like Wikipedia so I can have the right dates for events that happen during that time.
I like having those small elements because it helps set it. In an unusual stroke of luck, A film my MC watched with an ex, happens to be the film being shown on tv on a particular day and time when he's watching with someone else... which leads to a horror film dvd being put on instead. I only just discovered it when I was checking the listings. My story goes back to the end of 2003 because that was when I originally started it. There are quite a few events that happen in 2004 and 2005 which work out perfectly in regards to laws that came into place in the UK too.
I do the exact same thing. If my characters are going to see a movie, I will look up to see what movies actually came out that weekend or right before. Or if they were staying at home to watch TV, I would pull up the TV schedules to see what would have actually been shown that night. Or even for older settings, "Radio Logs", which fulfilled the same purpose in the time of radio...
Whoa, you two are serious! I don't go to that extent, but I appreciate people who do. I tend to stick with what I know so that I don't have to spend too much time doing research. I even got in trouble about what order the jam and cream go when eating a scone, so I can imagine the hell someone could take about misplacing Star Wars in 1975!
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A great many of mine are what I joke might work on Twilight Zone, if it had aired on the Playboy Channel. "Carla's Inhibitions" is one such. You read it expecting one thing, and I do everything I can in crafting the narration to cause people to come to what should be the natural conclusion. Only at the end to "pull the rug out", and cause the reader to rethink everything they had let themselves believe until that point.
I admit, I love trying to craft stories where in the end the reader would be going "OK, what the fuck? What the fuck did I just read there?" The surprise when you realize that Bruce Willis was dead all along, or that the wife sold her hair for wigs so she could get her husband a watch fob. Only to learn he sold his watch so he could buy her a set of lovely hair combs. I do not do that for every story of course, but more and more lately I do.
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I do like a surprise ending. Kind of a let down in porn/erotica, if you're gearing up for a sexy climax but some twist derails that. But if it's done right... I'll have to take a look at yours once I get through some of my reading queue!
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Also, the cock pics are nice too...LOL
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maybe you, @kkikkiriccio, want to start a cock + female + alphabet thread...
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Love
Lola
FYI, for all of us who think the cock pictures are nice and want to go for something a little different... I started a topic about ejaculation action photos maybe 2 weeks ago:
https://forum.lushstories.com/yaf_postst73242_Ejaculation-action-photos.aspx
You could pop over there from time to time and look/add in there? Not much in there now, and I'd love to see it take off!
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I have a huge imagination and love writing about wild and crazy subjects. Some stories have bits and pieces of true things in my life or things that have happened to friends.
I like to take my characters in all kinds of directions. I never plan out my stories and just write them on the cuff. I giggle and crack up while I write them.
Hugs,
Mysteria
I was just gonna ask "what kind of wild and crazy subjects?" But it looks like I just need to get myself busy reading some of the volumes of stuff you've written! If I wasn't into BDSM or anal or ff or mm (I hope that doesn't limit me too much!), which of your stories should I start with?
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Another thing I often do is include what is or could be an "unhappy ending". And I actually do this for "balance".
Most times I tend towards long, romance type stories. And on more than once occasion, I have found myself starting to get a "sugar overload" from all the sweetness. And generally when that starts to happen, I write one or two darker stories. Nothing really like snuff, torture or anything like that. But it may have the end of a relationship, or something else tragic. I find writing something like that helps me get it out of my system, so I can return to the light and fluffy style again.
Interesting... I'm certainly more light and fluffy myself, because writing erotic stuff is an escape and fantasy exploration exercise for me. But I try to incorporate realism and I can see how darker stuff is a legitimate way of dealing with messy life.
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Hi there...I made the rules, yes. But the thread top only says cock plus alphabet...my fault....I think cock alone and alphabet is less confusing....
Also, the cock pics are nice too...LOL
maybe you, @kkikkiriccio, want to start a cock + female + alphabet thread...
We let this one die its natural death and continue on your new one??????
Love
Lola
Oh, I wouldn't want this topic to die! I like it. Pursue posting plenty of pictures of plump penises! If one slips in (naughty pun intended!) without a female from time to time, let's roll with it!
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Cock and Nutella
Yumz! I hope the food theme is gaining traction!
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oh, but you broke the rules! No female!
Yes but the photos were so good.
I agree! But rules are rules. Maybe the one who started to topic, @Daughter-of-Samurai, should judge whether to let it slide or not?
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Cock and Nutella
Yumz! I hope the food theme is gaining traction!
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oh, but you broke the rules! No female!
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Pic got deleted, so I add another Lunch pic
Ooo, yum! Thank you for picking up the Lunch pic. I went back and edited my post putting in a new pic URL. Is it showing for everyone now?
Shameless plug: if you like the idea of a man umm, providing a special condiment, read my naughty story, Afternoon Tea!
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Sure.
One thing I try to include is from my own experiences. That is at least trying to capture the sounds of making love. Just the sounds that 2 bodies can make I find incredibly arousing, and I often try to capture that. Plus it lets me sometimes have fun with an onomatopoeia like "schlurp".
And another, the "messy aftermath". After using rubbers for months when my wife and I first got intimate, she admitted it was a surprise to her when she got on the pill and we dumped them just how messy everything could be. So I also include that. Not from any kind of "creampie fetish", but simply in recognition that sex can be messy, and things can... leak.
Both of them for me are simply trying to more accurately describe such acts. And something I include in almost any story I write, but read almost nowhere else unless it is part of a fetish.
I sure do breathing and grunting a lot, but it sounds like I need to read your stories for some schlurpiness!
Messy aftermath is a good one! I know there's the standard "...then I came all over her [tits/face]..." stuff, but, that got old like in the 1990s. Apologies to everyone who likes a good ejaculation (I do too in its place), but leaking is more...real. I have some leakage at the end of in my lovely story A Walk in the Park, and things get quite authentically warm and gooey at the climax (pun intended!) of Morning Wood!
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I like to use a lot of real locations, including some that have vanished since the time period of the story. A few stories don't have specific locations, but it often makes it seem more plausible if it is happening in a particular place.
Nice! I never have really done that... I tend to think "only a very few would appreciate details about my suburb or train route", but, then again, not everyone fantasizes about the people with the various features I describe either... so you have a point about the "plausibility". Thanks for your contibution!
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If you like food in sex, you might enjoy "Don't You Just Love Jelly and Cream".
Sorry to hijack your thread to plug my own stuff...
Annie x
I don't consider your link "hijacking" at all -- I regard it as welcome participation!
I have a similar-ish story involving breakfast foods that has a little less splodging squidginess than yours, but still plenty of smearing and slurping, written for another venue a year or more ago. It will take me some time to get to editing it, but I'll try to remember to notify you when it's ready!
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♫♪♬♫♪ I can post links now ♫♪♬♪♪
So, the shameless self-promotion continues. In case many of you don't read many words in forum posts and missed the link in my last comment... here's a teasing (clickable!) picture (the cover image) for you:
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Congratulations! It's a great feeling when your first story goes online and you realise people are actually reading it.
I'll have a look at them both later.
Thanks for your note!
Annie, You have a ton of diverse interests and seem to have been at this a while... I need to pick some of yours. OMG, I read your poem about the lodger yesterday, and, wow! I know it's old, from a few years a go, but it sure got me going. I'd call it a classic!.
I have some more in the works, but I don't have much time to edit and they might be slow coming, but... since I'm sure you all enjoyed my first two, here's the third:
Afternoon Tea
Annie, by your profile "like"s and "love"s, you may enjoy that one. It incorporates a little masturbation, a little blowjobbiness, a little ejaculation, some food (I'm surprised you don't list that one, but may I suggest you try it)... and a lot of vibrator!
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It's been way too long, but the last time was into my condom, inside my vagina. I provided it.
The condom, and the vagina, haha.
I actually like it when I don't take the cumshot, but watch it... but that's been way too long as well.
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Yes i went out without panties many times while wearing short skirt. My hubby also likes me to do dare stuffs when we go out.
Nice when the person you're with also knows!
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Fruits n vegetables n my face massager as a substitute for vibrator
LOL - I've heard of an electric toothbrush but not a face massager!
One of my kinks is sex (including self-pleasure) involving food. What fruits n vegetables, may I ask?