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If your mirror had been clean
I'm sure that you would have seen
That your eyes are fooling you
I am sexiest, that is true
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Roses are red
And so are my cheeks
When I think of the moments
Of which she speaks
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LYNNWITT

Letting you nibble nipples will invoke tiny tremors
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Quote by ThisPing4U


Absolutely!

Good stuff.

Do we now hold ourselves to a higher standard?


If you want to, but in this thread, I think fun an creativity weigh more than the the right numbers of syllables with the correct emphasis.
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Because.... uhm.... because I want..... her pu...uhhm.. her peanutbutter cookies recipe
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Quote by ThisPing4U
A (7, 8 or 9 syllables)
A (7, 8 or 9)
B (5 or 6)
B (5 or 6)
A (7, 8 or 9)

Remember that lines 1, 2, & 5 (A) must all be the same meter (if line 1 is 7 syllables, the other two must be as well)

And lines 3 & 4 (B) must be the same meter

It's not just the number of syllables and the rhyme scheme, that make a limerick, there is a pretty standardised meter for them as well.

These are the ones most used, the ones that fit in limerick songs, where DUM indentifies the syllables with emphasis :

taDUMta taDUMta taDUMta or
tadaDUM tadaDUM tadaDUM (ta) for lines 1, 2 and 5 and

taDUMta taDUM or
tadaDUM tadaDUM for lines 3 and 4
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Nigeria? Internet scams, fishing mails, oil pollution

Peru: Origin of the Amazon River, Inkas, Lamas, keňa music, Machu Pichu

Ireland
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Above - below can look after him/herself!
Aw... poor me! Let's hope someone who does want to kiss me shows up below
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Quote by lynnwitt
Of course! It could, though, degenerate into a bash of Jr High humor.
That could happen, but that would be fun too..


And Yes, of course @Leah
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In spite of the things that you do
The sexiest here isn't you
I'm sure you can see
That the winner is me
And everyone knows that is true
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Sauerkraut und Schweinegebrat,
selbstverständlich mit ausreichend Bier

Holland
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A) My arms slip quickly around you
A) To show I'm so happy I found you
B) under the stars we dance
B) will you give us a chance
A) to find a place where i can pound you
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Quote by adi_me33
You motherfuckers fighting in the forums are pissing me off. It's ugly. Be adults and leave each other alone. FUCK. I feel like I'm taking crazy pills. Forums are for fun. Here's an example....
I agree. If you need to spout acid about something, use the rage cage and get it out of your system. Don't pollute the fun part of the forum with nasty and childish remarks. They are more telling about the poster, than about his targets.
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Kissing above, a little more than just a friendly one, if I may
And of course I'll peek below...
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Quote by CheifPussyPop
She is looking for a fiery-guy to melt the ice, but all she finds is cold-guy that keep her feeling like an icygirl.
Maybe it's a good idea to carefully look at a thread before you post, so you have a clue what it is about.

ICYGIRL

I caught you going in really loud
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That depends on intentions, but for intimacy I prefer a quiet secluded area

Would you rather be the beauty or the beast (male beauties and female beasts are entirely possible here)?
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The warden couldn't find the key to her dungeon door..
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Roses are red
A hangover's bad
Which's, I'm happy to say
A thing that I never had
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