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patokl
Over 90 days ago
Straight Cis Male
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Quote by Saphria


I've always used gravestone as the answer for this one LOL! Could also be a coffin.

I stand in front of Women, I stand at the back of the cow.
What am I?


The letter W

I'm hard and dry going in, I'm soft and wet coming out, what am I?
Quote by Saphria


I've always used gravestone as the answer for this one LOL! Could also be a coffin.

I stand in front of Women, I stand at the back of the cow.
What am I?


The letter W

I'm hard and dry going in, I'm soft and wet coming out, what am I?
For me wouldn't matter. I live today, not in the past. If the spark is there, it's there.
Of course I would. I'd let her know though, give her the choice of what I'm allowed to see and maybe, do...
I sometimes fantasize about it and in my fantasy world, it's great. If it were to happen in real life, I wouldn't last a day. I couldn't live with the idea of "owning" a human being, depriving someone of her free will, even if she did that willingly.
I largely agree with Magical_Felix, although I like the way you build the conversation. I agree, that the conversation could be a separate paragraph, but for me, the sentences following up on each other the way they do here, works, though separating the sentences more clearly using periods or hard returns would make it a bit easier to read. I also think, you should at least start a new sentence following that conversation, for example "As we started watching the movie again...." in stead of "but as we started watching the movie again....". On the whole, I think there is room for improvement, but I definitely like your writing style and I think this could become a really good story.
Wipe me off your floorboards, you heartless beauty witch...
It doesn't need to rhyme does it?
Because love, it ain't a two-way street
I'm tired of playing cat and mouse, or panting hound and bitch.
And tired of falling asleep at the wheel
So while we drive, please make me feel
Nope. I am fully aware, that having or being a daddy-dom has absolutely nothing to do with or . I have nothing against people who enjoy that lifestyle. But.... I have children. The words dad and daddy automatically switch me to parent-mode. Parent-mode excludes sexual behavior for obvious reasons, so calling me daddy automatically switches of my sex-drive.
Quote by loneleygirl68
Thank you! and I only meant last as in last for tonight...didn't
want to bombard the forum with poems. I appreciate the positive words. Thank you!
poetry like this? Please bombard me.
Quote by patokl

Want to say two things:
1. This is an wonderful poem that imho deserves a spot on the homepage. Publish it!
2. I find your promise, this will be your last one, a bit disturbing. I hope that I'm reading that wrong.
I obviously failed to notice your previous posts, I guess that answers my second remark. The first one however stands and it applies to your previous poems as well.
Quote by loneleygirl68
Lost

Speak and be Heard
I hide in Shame,
the Death of Desire,
and I am to Blame.

A Voice is Silenced,
It's Death screams out,
my world torn apart,
Left in Doubt.

Hope and Despair
war from Within,
When will it finish,
Where does it Begin.

Acceptance and Love
could have been mine,
If I hadn't been Lost,
in a Place out of Time.

Want to say two things:
1. This is an wonderful poem that imho deserves a spot on the homepage. Publish it!
2. I find your promise, this will be your last one, a bit disturbing. I hope that I'm reading that wrong.
I am not aware of having anything more than a free membership, yet I seem to have access to all the features bronze offers. Am I overlooking something or am I an anomaly?
I told you we shouldn't drink that last bottle of vodka.....
Should I step aside
Witness the coming battle
First aid kit ready?
Oh my, oh dear me
Am I trapped in a bitch fight
Fought out in haikus?
Quote by sprite


bi yi yi yi yi
yi yi yi yi yi yi yi
yi yi yi te me





This one made me smile
It clearly is a haiku
And it's funny too
Don't call it haiku
if you don't want to conform
to what makes it that
There is no need for you to get fussy
And you don't have to feel like a hussey
You just have to say no
But then you'll never know
How it feels when I'm eating your pussy
I've had a vasectomy and a reconstruction. Both times a nurse did the shaving and I survived that without a scratch.
Don't do it, if you're only doing it, because you see it as a mandatory part of having sex. Guys sense it, if you don't really want to and you are not comfy with it, at least, I do. It's an absolute turn-off for me.
Quote by nicola
1 had no full-stop.
took care of that
There's a sweet little lady named Mina
Who is is "blessed" with a dripping vagina
Very sexy she's not
But when she gets hot
They can hear her sizzle in China
Though it is not the best drink for me
I can surely appreciate tea
but to put dairy in
is considered a sin
for I do want to taste it, you see?
She shivered as she felt his lips touching hers, as she felt his tongue softly exploring the folds between them, ever closer to her rosebud.
Quote by monainohio
i been trying to get my wife to go nude in our home for 13 years what am i doing wrong. i love being naked in our home in fact i am mostly naked in the home and want her to ddo same any tips would be great thanks in advance
Why change the one you love into something she obviously doesn't want to be? The only thing you will create by that in the long run is more distance. Nobody wants to stay, where she can't just be herself.
The woman that's known as Mysteria
would undoubtedly cause some hysteria
in the officers mess
if she took of her dress
and then checked if they fit her criteria
Trinket, that's a name to play with:

A real sexy lady named Trinket
said I'll cum on your face, if you'll drink it
but you will be to late
if you just contemplate
for I want you to do it, not think it
A sexy young woman from land's end
once pleasured herself with her hands and
she really had fun
but when she was done
she never found out where her pants went
There once was a man from GlenGallish
who found women a thing to abolish
but he did love all boys
for they could with their toys
give his hem'roids the ultimate polish