The faces/expressions made out of punctuation marks drive me crazy. Are we all three years old and unable to read words like grown-ups?
This is not cool (or kewl) but symptomatic of the dumbing down of everything in popular culture. It is a deliberate laziness and ignorance that will not lead to anything good. Try applying to a professional school or for an upper level position writing in text speak. I don't think it will make a great impression. Literacy matters.
(I just read what I wrote and understand that I am now officially an old curmudgeon, but I don't take it back.)
A good start would be a post describing your story and what help you need.
I do have some suggestions for you before you hand your story off to someone else. First, read all of the material on grammar, formatting, etc. in the Writer's Resources. Do not rely on spell check alone as you proof your story as it does not catch mistakes that are words producing unfortunate errors like, "he put his hands on my waste". Put in some of your own time and, even if someone proofs it for you, make an effort to learn from your mistakes and the corrections that are made. That is the way to become a better writer.
And the previous post was correct. Please is good manners.
What I am trying to communicate is that you are wilfully blind to the damage that , abuse, and violence do in reality, by prettying it up under the guise of fantasy. It is disingenuous of you to pretend it is anything else.
I have been very clear. We will not agree about this.
I will be blunt, Callidus. You approach this from the point of view of fantasy. Do you have any idea what it is like to be the victim of a , or sexual abuse as a child, or violence? Or has that happened to anyone close to you? I suspect not. If it had these questions would not have been asked and you would have accepted the answers that have been graciously provided to you.
The reality of , abuse, and violence is not pretty or artistic or the stuff of fantasy. It is ugly and painful and criminal, and far more prevalent than any of us would like to think. Frankly, whether you accept this or not, whether it makes sense to you or not, does not matter. You have a choice to stay and be member within these parameters or leave and find a or snuff or site that appeals to you more.
Beach in the winter and mountains in the summer.
Favourite wine and why is it your fave?
If I must choose one, it is "Out For Dinner", the first of the Robert and Juliana series and inspired by a restaurant where I have frequently been out for dinner.
These stories written with Alphamagus about Robert and Juliana each stand alone, and can be enjoyed in any order, but this was the start for them and for our partnership as writers. The stories are sexy and erotic, but also describe a real, loving relationship - not robotic sex. Food and wine seem always to be involved, perhaps because they are part of sensuality. There is also an element of playfulness and humour in each story. It would be our privilege to have more of you read them.
Thunderstorms
Rain
The ocean
Music
The voice of a loved one - real or remembered
The wind of a blizzard when you are warm indoors
Professor of Women's Studies, teaching a course on sexuality
Eyes, laugh, mind. Sorry, I cannot choose one.
You are asking this question on Lush?
The answer must be "yes" - and for the reverse, a woman making a man come - or this place would have far fewer members. I realize that many read and do not cyber, but the demographic still must be pretty high.
As to your situation, again the answer is "yes" if he is skilful and attentive.
(Sorry for barging into Ask the Guys, but even Augusta is open to women now.)
Love it.
