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it is sooo distracting as you talk urself into a wank break instead of a cig break!!
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Over 90 days ago
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Lol @ satyr
Got your comment, hmmm maybe you are right with that chapter, not good at writing romantic characters!!
I have just read some of your stuff, you reallllllllllly described the characters, where i possibly over describe the situation
Have tried to incorporate in part 6
Got your comment, hmmm maybe you are right with that chapter, not good at writing romantic characters!!
I have just read some of your stuff, you reallllllllllly described the characters, where i possibly over describe the situation
Have tried to incorporate in part 6
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Quote by Lil_Birdie
Here is an alternate approach to people who vote a two. Imagine them sitting there reading your story. When they get to the end they say to themselves, "OMG! This is one twisted woman!!", and they score a two because they are afraid to admit that what they just read made them jizz all over themselves.
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Awww fankooo for making me feel better!
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two financial themed posts in a row..... oooh someone isnt happy!
Money
Money
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Quote by Lil_Birdie
Yes it is a rule now. And besides...I just took a look at your stories and you rarely get scored lower than a 3. You have good comments and praises....Look at that, not the one or two low votes you actually did get a while back. You have a lot of high scores. Forget about the finicky few or it will drive you crazy.
Thank you - thats really sweet
I am not a professional writer, I actually find it fairly hard to write consisely as I miss words and my grammar... huh whats grammar? As for the content, it is pure fantasy, thoughts that I am way too inhibited to share with anyone in real life. Writing it in a story allows it to be unleashed and having people enjoy but also not judge makes you feel less guilty for thinking it - infact I get a buzz when I get good feedback as the guilt turns to acceptance
I guess I am over-sensitive when I get the "occassional" bad score, however the "balanced adults" have the decency to PM me or chat on the Lush Chat about what it was that didnt work for them. When I wrote chapter 4 of my current story I included alot of the feedback I got from two LushFriends who were... blunt but honest.
There was one female who chatted to me, not liking the theme - but when I told her to not read reluctance stories if it offends her, she was ok. I hate the thought of , infact it infurates me so.... I dont read it. If I am getting low scores becuase I am politically offending people, then they shouldnt read.
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Quote by Lil_Birdie
People ARE forced to comment when a score of 1 is given.
Is it? I didnt realise as I have never scored anyone a 1 or a 2!
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Quote by OrionTat
So you only write for rankings? Why is it that you people need to fight over every single person liking your story. This isn't the eighth grade, there isn't some big conspiracy out to get you, write to write and you will get better. There are plenty of people out there who will offer criticism where it is warranted, granted most will not when you have to start a new crying post everytime you get a bad story review.
Plus I can't remember how many great authors when being interviewed for their new book say, " I wrote it cause the money was good." Instead of "I wrote it because I love to write."
How do you propose people will "get better" if what they are not given feedback on what they needing to improve on
No, I dont write for rankings, I write as I want people to enjoy, when they havent enjoyed I would like to know why. I do write becuase I enjoy, but i PUBLISH to gain feedback and adult views on my content, if i just did it for solely needing to type, I would save it on my USB stick and leave it private
If people dont feel criticism is warranted than dont score, but to score lowly without having the guts to back that action with a comment to me is gutless.
I hope you werent implying that I have made a habit of "crying" as I dont believe I have raised this point before. So whoever you are referring to as "you people" cant be me. As for the conspiracy..... WTF was that about?
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LUSH - The sexiest place on the net!!
Hmmm, I can do better - watch this space!
Hmmm, I can do better - watch this space!
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I may be corrected, but there doesnt seem to be a Lush Slogan/Strapline
As a game (which could be seen as beneficial) can we make some up
A slogan for those that dont know is a few words after a brandname which should capture the essence of the product
For example in italics:
"Gillette - The best a man can get" (Obviously I am the best a man can get, but hey)
"Mr Muscle - Loves the jobs you hate"
"Argos - Dont shop for it, Argos it"
"Carlsberg - Probably the best larger in the world"
Get it?
As a game (which could be seen as beneficial) can we make some up
A slogan for those that dont know is a few words after a brandname which should capture the essence of the product
For example in italics:
"Gillette - The best a man can get" (Obviously I am the best a man can get, but hey)
"Mr Muscle - Loves the jobs you hate"
"Argos - Dont shop for it, Argos it"
"Carlsberg - Probably the best larger in the world"
Get it?
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Dear All
I have been getting a couple of low scores recently, I appreciate that my story is not to everyones taste, or possibly completely crap which is a tad upsetting. However, what is even MOREEEEEEEE upsetting is:
This is an ADULT site, by that virtue one would assume the readers/members were also adults. Adults come in various forms:
- The insecure adult: Who believes that they have no purpose in life and thus kick others down so they feel superioer
- The scared adult: Who has an opinion but doesnt believe others care, possibly re-enforced by some playground misery
- The balanced adult: One who wishes to compliment where due and criticise when it is necessary to help others, but if has nothing nice to say stays silent
It is obvious that by the amount of low scores given which are not followed by constructive feedback, that we have a few insecure and scared members amongst us. Or maybe some, who wish to exert their anger that I made them shoot their load so hard, it stained their carpet!
Please see this post as criticism that is necessary to help insecure and scared people become balanced
Personally, I think those that score 1-2 should be forced to make a comment or be unable to submit.
I have been getting a couple of low scores recently, I appreciate that my story is not to everyones taste, or possibly completely crap which is a tad upsetting. However, what is even MOREEEEEEEE upsetting is:
This is an ADULT site, by that virtue one would assume the readers/members were also adults. Adults come in various forms:
- The insecure adult: Who believes that they have no purpose in life and thus kick others down so they feel superioer
- The scared adult: Who has an opinion but doesnt believe others care, possibly re-enforced by some playground misery
- The balanced adult: One who wishes to compliment where due and criticise when it is necessary to help others, but if has nothing nice to say stays silent
It is obvious that by the amount of low scores given which are not followed by constructive feedback, that we have a few insecure and scared members amongst us. Or maybe some, who wish to exert their anger that I made them shoot their load so hard, it stained their carpet!
Please see this post as criticism that is necessary to help insecure and scared people become balanced
Personally, I think those that score 1-2 should be forced to make a comment or be unable to submit.
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this is the first time i read it.......... fankooo x
First brit hey? whoooop whoooop!
First brit hey? whoooop whoooop!
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i only done option 2......... raah, you girls and guys are kinky!
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this is odd hey, at first you think of it as a joke.... like a redneck ritual, thinking "what a cool dad", then you realise he is 14 and you think, "hmmm if he was 18, ok.... but 14 hmmm!" then you read the charge "trying to solicit a woman to have sex with a child" and you're like, woooah, "Sick bastard!!"
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Shaved...... never been shaved before
Fingered or Licked?
Fingered or Licked?
