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You tell them scrappy brunette 29. We are far beyond the days when woman had to accept only what a man was willing to offer her. The only thing you maybe could have added is a second round.

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I don't have a preference in general between first and third person (your first and second examples). They're both standard formats for fiction writing, and I've read plenty of great erotic stories using one or the other.

I find references to "you" (second person, your third example) to be challenging as a reader. Unless the story is really compelling to me, a second person perspective will take me out of it. As you noted, you have to identify very closely with that "you" in order for it to work, so a writer risks alienating a large part of his or her readership out of the gate. I generally find it odd to be told what "I" am doing or thinking. Again, there are always exceptions, but that's been my experience.

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You, too?

I had a thing for Red from Hellboy for a long time. Would not mind - would not mind at all.