Story advice

My first attempt at writing a story so far. Any advice is welcome. Especially if mukti-chapter might be better than single long narrative.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/mature/my-first-solo-vacation

I cannot read it but would love to... hottie

Quote by stil41Well

My first attempt at writing a story so far. Any advice is welcome. Especially if mukti-chapter might be better than single long narrative.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/mature/my-first-solo-vacation

Sorry but the link takes you to “page not found”

I suspect it's still in Drafts. People can't see your drafts. If you want an "editor" to look at it, put it on a cloud drive and share it with that person directly. But you can't share unapproved work here.

Quote by Seeker4

I suspect it's still in Drafts. People can't see your drafts. If you want an "editor" to look at it, put it on a cloud drive and share it with that person directly. But you can't share unapproved work here.

Thanks for the explanation Seeker4

Quote by Seeker4

I suspect it's still in Drafts. People can't see your drafts. If you want an "editor" to look at it, put it on a cloud drive and share it with that person directly. But you can't share unapproved work here.

I agree with your recommendation.

This can be a glitch. Although not hyperlinked, the plain text previously worked when I opened it. The page looked like how a published story looks like but with 'Drafts' written somewhere on the upper left side of the story. There were a few paragraphs with a story cover of a woman outdoors, if my memory serves me right. I didn't read it at the time.

When I checked back after Santiago added a reply, the plain text resulted to a 'page not found' which is the same as the hyperlink on her profile.

Got it. Next time I'll share directly before submitting. Still learning about even the basics of this site.