C'è qualcuno qui chi può aiutarmi con il mio italiano?

29 Jan 2021

Hi! I'm writing a story featuring an Italian character. I want her to utter some reasonably convincing (and hopefully appropriately filthy) talk whilst in flagrante delicto (er, that last phrase is not Italian, obvs). I am writing her dialogue in my fairly rudimentary Italian - but I was wondering if there is a native Italian speaker here who would be willing to help me tidy it up, and ensure that it is genuinely sexy, and not just dumb...?

Please feel free to PM me.

Thank you so much!

Grusha

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7 May 2021

Ciao, forse posso fare qualcosa per te... (maybe I can to do somethings for you)

7 May 2021

Quote by Lanziano
Ciao, forse posso fare qualcosa per te... (maybe I can to do somethings for you)

Ciao, Lanziano. Grazie, ma - l'ho gia scritto!
E la storia e qui:
Metamorphoses chapter 2
Cosa pensi? Il mio italiano e accettabile?
Grusha

GrushaVashnadze's best stories:

Alison Goes to London (RR) - "love this... fun, and funny, and sexy" (sprite)

The Cursed Cunt (RR) - "holyyyyy sheeeiiit.... Your writing is fucking fantastic" (CarltonStJames)

A Worthless Filthy Fucking Smoking Trash Cunt Whore (RR) - "Brilliantly done. Of course." (naughtyannie)

Snow White and the Seven Dildos (RR) - "Fuck. It's perfect.... honestly genius and so fucking well executed." (VioletVixen)

Metamorphoses (RR) - "so imaginative and entertaining" (saucymh)

And There Came Two Angels to Sodom - "What a deliciously worded story! So juicy, so raunchy" (el_henke)

Fuck-Talk (with VioletVixen) - "Jeez. I feel rendered wordless by how much clever fucking fun this is" (Jaymal)

7 May 2021

Ok then I will read it and I will tell you what I think. See you soon

8 May 2021

Hi Grusha,
I Have read the story. First and second part obviously. Good story e good Italian. Only few comments.
Puttana is write with 2t, putana it's not italian.
"Fottimi il culo" is few used, better to tell "inculami".
"gran cazzo" is archaic expression, now we use "cazzone" it's more vulgar.
Bye

8 May 2021

Quote by Lanziano
Hi Grusha,
I Have read the story. First and second part obviously. Good story e good Italian. Only few comments.
Puttana is write with 2t, putana it's not italian.
"Fottimi il culo" is few used, better to tell "inculami".
"gran cazzo" is archaic expression, now we use "cazzone" it's more vulgar.
Bye

Lanziano, thank you - I will store up your suggestions for the next time I edit that story! Especially "cazzone": anything which makes it more vulgar sounds good to me! ;)

Grazie tanto!
Grusha

GrushaVashnadze's best stories:

Alison Goes to London (RR) - "love this... fun, and funny, and sexy" (sprite)

The Cursed Cunt (RR) - "holyyyyy sheeeiiit.... Your writing is fucking fantastic" (CarltonStJames)

A Worthless Filthy Fucking Smoking Trash Cunt Whore (RR) - "Brilliantly done. Of course." (naughtyannie)

Snow White and the Seven Dildos (RR) - "Fuck. It's perfect.... honestly genius and so fucking well executed." (VioletVixen)

Metamorphoses (RR) - "so imaginative and entertaining" (saucymh)

And There Came Two Angels to Sodom - "What a deliciously worded story! So juicy, so raunchy" (el_henke)

Fuck-Talk (with VioletVixen) - "Jeez. I feel rendered wordless by how much clever fucking fun this is" (Jaymal)