I like it. though I must say I find two words are breaking of the flow...
I don't know why, but it feels like it, to me. Know and here.
"Are more than you can know."
"You can always read it here"
It feels like thoose two lines could be reworked and have the same meaning but without breaking the flow.
(I'd be very happy to get a poem like this, as it is, but if you ask for my opinion of the poem, I can't hold back what I think.)
Love is such a simple word
And yet its meaning seems
To be so illusive,
And far away from me.
I've said it many times it's true
But never have I meant
The meaning behind the words
The way I do with you.
I know at times I frustrate,
And it seems that I don't care.
But the feelings that i have for you
Are more than you can know.
I hope that this short poem
can show you how I feel
And though its hard for me to say
You can always read it here
I appreciate the comment Cat, and just FYI, I DID receive it...
My bf wrote it for me. I thought it was beautiful, I just didn't know if I was looking at it through rose-colored glasses so I thought I'd ask other's opinions.
Ling
:O
He wrote it!
Oh gosh...I envy you...
I want to be inlove with someone too...
That sounds real nice, Ling.
