Here's some initial feedback on All Systems Functioning, my "foolish" competition story:
"A true classic" (el_henke)
"your best work, Grusha" (StarBelliedBoy)
"Just excellent... fabulous story" (CuriousAnnie)
"Highly entertaining!" (curvygalore)
"Confusticate and bebother those mental dwarves who do not love this." (ChrisM)
If you're trying to work out what the heck ChrisM is going on about, you'll just have to read the story!
Grusha
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GrushaVashnadze's best stories:
Alison Goes to London (RR) - "love this... fun, and funny, and sexy" (sprite)
The Cursed Cunt (RR) - "holyyyyy sheeeiiit.... Your writing is fucking fantastic" (CarltonStJames)
A Worthless Filthy Fucking Smoking Trash Cunt Whore (RR) - "Brilliantly done. Of course." (naughtyannie)
Snow White and the Seven Dildos (RR) - "Fuck. It's perfect.... honestly genius and so fucking well executed." (VioletVixen)
Metamorphoses (RR) - "so imaginative and entertaining" (saucymh)
And There Came Two Angels to Sodom - "What a deliciously worded story! So juicy, so raunchy" (el_henke)
Fuck-Talk (with VioletVixen) - "Jeez. I feel rendered wordless by how much clever fucking fun this is" (Jaymal)