Here's some initial feedback on All Systems Functioning, my "foolish" competition story:
"A true classic" (el_henke)
"your best work, Grusha" (StarBelliedBoy)
"Just excellent... fabulous story" (CuriousAnnie)
"Highly entertaining!" (curvygalore)
"Confusticate and bebother those mental dwarves who do not love this." (ChrisM)
If you're trying to work out what the heck ChrisM is going on about, you'll just have to read the story!
Grusha
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GrushaVashnadze's best stories:
Alison Goes to London (RR) - “A unique - and uniquely filthy - work of the imagination... Consider me sold.” (Jaymal)
The Cursed Cunt (RR) - "holyyyyy sheeeiiit.... Your writing is fucking fantastic" (CarltonStJames)
Snow White and the Seven Dildos (RR) - “Absurd genius… Brilliant.” (StarBelliedBoy)
Metamorphoses (RR) - “Your cultured filth is such a treat and the craft in this is sublime.” (CuriousAnnie)
And the rest are here.