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This is the story about a cruel, very severe female domination.
Laura is a terrible sadist.
She receives an exquisite pleasure from torturing her male victims.
Through the unbelievable pain and suffering, she totally destroys any dignity and self-esteem in her slaves.
One day, she successfully tricks a fellow student Alex into submission.
Poor Alex endures an unimaginable brutality from his beautiful Owner.
As a result, his life is completely ruined, and he becomes a living toy for vicious Laura.
Excerpt
Before you start reading my story, I want to warn you that I love extreme kinds of domination, while completely disregarding the safety.
I am a terrible sadist, and receive an exquisite pleasure from the torment of the miserable and weak men, who become my victims.
If this is not interesting for you, read something else.
My name is Laura and I am a real bitch. I am 23 years, and I have the distinctive facial features.
My height is 6 feet and 1 inch (without heels), long slender legs, 4 breast size, and a very significant look.
Men stick to me, and for me and my friends they become a constant source of pleasure and entertainment.
I met Alex at a college bar, where I take some courses. This bar is full of boys from the men's student organization.
I love to take someone out of this garbage, and bring home to plunge into reality - this is my style!
Alex was 5 feet 10 inches, with black hair, a goatee, and a gold ring in his left ear.
He came over, and offered to buy me a drink.
I ordered a gin and tonic, and when the bartender returned the change,
I reached out and took it from the bartender, and grinning down at Alex, put it in my pocket.
Alex was silent about it. For me it was a sign. I knew it - that's what I need.
I lit a cigarette, which Alex helpfully offered me. I had to shake off the ashes, and I ordered Alex to open his palm.
I shook off the ashes in his hand, and it caused a strong laughter across the bar.
I continued to use his hands as an ashtray for a while.
Alex was very puzzled, but my friendship seems to have been more important to him, so he did not resist.
When my cigarette had burned down, I dropped the butt into Alex’s glass and told him that I want to go home.
He looked at his hands, still holding the ashes, and before he lowered them, I whispered:
"Alex, if you want to spend time with me, you will have to agree to do everything that I'll tell you, no questions asked.
Are you ready for this?"
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Memories of a complete sadist
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Scarlet Seductress
Wow. That sounds absolutely terrible. What is described in the intro immediately made me think this is torture porn.
If that is an actual excerpt from the ebook then I think the author is aiming high at $1.24. Forgetting the actual content of the story for a moment, this sample pretty much sums up everything I hate in a story.
It starts with the 'shopping list', i.e. the physical description of the characters. That to me is the sign of a lazy author who couldn't be bothered to weave those details into the story. It also sounds like it is written by someone without a basic understanding of female anatomy (what is a '4 breast size'?). It lacks a serious amount of detail, for example, 'I have the distinctive facial features'. What, like an unibrow? It is also not paragraphed or punctuated properly and is grammatically incorrect in numerous places.
Needless to say, I will not be purchasing a copy.
If that is an actual excerpt from the ebook then I think the author is aiming high at $1.24. Forgetting the actual content of the story for a moment, this sample pretty much sums up everything I hate in a story.
It starts with the 'shopping list', i.e. the physical description of the characters. That to me is the sign of a lazy author who couldn't be bothered to weave those details into the story. It also sounds like it is written by someone without a basic understanding of female anatomy (what is a '4 breast size'?). It lacks a serious amount of detail, for example, 'I have the distinctive facial features'. What, like an unibrow? It is also not paragraphed or punctuated properly and is grammatically incorrect in numerous places.
Needless to say, I will not be purchasing a copy.
Wild at Heart
Quote by Liz
what is a '4 breast size'?
The #4 combo at KFC comes with a breast piece and an individual sized side dish of your choice. I've smoked 2 marijuanas and still know that, keep up.
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by Magical_felix
The #4 combo at KFC comes with a breast piece and an individual sized side dish of your choice. I've smoked 2 marijuanas and still know that, keep up.
do they still offer the carrot salad thingy with raisins in it? i can't recall the last time i was in a KFC.
You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.
Wild at Heart
Quote by sprite
do they still offer the carrot salad thingy with raisins in it? i can't recall the last time i was in a KFC.
Carrot salad with raisins? Muthafucka... I said KFC not the Four Seasons.
Scarlet Seductress
Quote by Magical_felix
The #4 combo at KFC comes with a breast piece and an individual sized side dish of your choice. I've smoked 2 marijuanas and still know that, keep up.
Two whole marijuanas? You loco, esé.
Her Royal Spriteness
Quote by Magical_felix
Carrot salad with raisins? Muthafucka... I said KFC not the Four Seasons.
i had some sort of mayo sauce in it, too... and maybe walnuts?
You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.