need a proofreader

If ya'll are still struggling, both on Grammarly and Google Docs, you can click on Shae in the upper right hand corner and get a link you can email

I.have never seen that is it on the story draft or on another page

First question is, are you using Grammarly or Google Docs? or are you using the lush story editor?

Google docs on the top grammerly on the bottom

I fall into the same delimma that the others do, I submitted (before I read what is required). Now I would like to have someone proof read. The moderator that read my story says it has good potential just has to come up to our standards.
I don't know how this works. The name of the story is Happy Birthday Pete. If it were published it would probably be in Swingers. I need help to get it published, because I have a continuation story that needs to be published too. Help Please

I'm a decent amateur editor, done quite a few stories in the past, including one full length novel. I'd be willing to help someone with a story they want to get into better shape. Reply to me here and we'll figure out the methods we'll use. cheers!