this is my first story and I need help
So here I am 19 years old and about to start my college days.What an exciting time it's gonna be.So you wanna know who I am I guess well the name's Brian I'm 19 years old as said from beautiful LA,California.I'm 5'11",pretty athletic build nothing spectacular but I try to stay in shape and got green eyes and somewhat longer brown hair.Now thanks to my usual lazyness I still had no place to stay during college.One day on campus,while talking to some friends I found an add from a girl looking for a roommate."What do I got to lose" I thought so I got my phone and called:
"Hello who's there?"
"Yo,it's brian I saw your add you need a roommate?"
"Yep thats correct I suppose you're interested.If so come around I'll just get dressed"
"Sounds good I got the adress I'll be there in an hour"
So I was on my way to the place and thinking about what to expect.I didn't really care much about how the place looked aslong as I had a place to stay and the rent was cheap.But my mind also wandered to my possible new roommate I didn't know what to expect.My ex broke up with me 3 months ago and well let's just say I'm sitting on the dry ever since.Once I got there I tried ringing the doorbell but the door opened before I got to.
"Sorry for surprising you but I saw you coming already"a voice shouted from upstairs.So there I was in front of my new place and my jaw almost dropped to the basement.My future roommate was stunning about 5'8",perfect curves in just the right places and long black hair with red highlights.She was wearing red skin tight jeans and a suicide silence shirt with the sleeves cut off.I like this girl already.
"Don't you wanna come in?"
"Ohh...sure right "
She went around showing me the place and I took the opportunity to check out her nice ass.I'm a guy what can I say.
"Where's my room?"
"Right here next to mine"
"Alright I'll take it"
"Oh really?Wow thanks so much I've been looking for a whole week now"
To celebrate I invited her to dinner which she happily agreed to.We got along great her name is Rachel and she's from San Francisco so a fellow californian.She's studying biology and wants to become a nurse,which I found to be really cool.We also share the same interest in music and tv shows and she even plays video games like me.We spent the evening watching a movie and she got pretty close
"I hope you don't mind I haven't spent time with a guy in a long time".Hell like I would complain
So the next few weeks were pretty uneventful between lessons and spending time with Rach.One evening she told me of her failed acting career."One day I was offered a huge role in a movie it could have been my breakthrough."
"So why did you decide not to?"
"Well there was one scene where I would have to be completely naked."
So she's not that easy I like that.It was weird though as she had no problems showing off her curves at home always wearing tight fitting clothes,short skirts and tank tops,which she filled out quite nice.
But one night would change everything.After a party she came home,ran off to the bathroom with tears in her eyes and slammed the door.I went to check on her
"Rach are you ok?"
"No I'm not the party was terrible they embarassed me."
"Why what happened?"
"Sorry I don't wanna talk about it"
Just as I was about to leave I heard a loud noise like someone falling so I quickly went into the room.
"Oh god what happened?"
"I slipped on the floor and fell.Ouch can you help me up?"
"Of course no problem."
It was kinda embarrasing she was only wearing bra and panties and admittedly I got rock hard since,as I said it's been a while since my last time with a girl.I carried her onto the couch in the living room and gave her a massage so she feels better.Suddenly I noticed a bulge in her panties but I ignored it.She went up and thanked me for my help when it finally all came together.While getting up a cock flopped out of her panties and I was shocked.She turned red,sat down and covered it with her hands
"Oh god brian don't look!"
"Was that what I think it was?"
"Yes I have a cock damnit!!!Thats why I went home early and why I didn't do the movie!You must think I'm a freak now."
She was close to crying again which I felt so sorry for.
"I dont think you're a freak You are still a great girl.Can I see it?"
"What?"
"Your cock I wanna see it"
She hesitated at first but took her hands away letting it spring to live.I dunno what got into me but I reached for it and stroked it.It was warm and pulsing in my hand it's quite big too a good 6 inches I'd guess.She leaned over and unzipped my pants letting them fall to the floor.
"Oh wow you hid that all the time from me?How mean"
I could see the lust in her eyes as she started jerking me and eventually took it in her mouth.My hand never left her cock.I dunno why I did what I did but I lifted her up into 69 position her fully erect cock dangling in front of my face so I started sucking it.The room filled with loud breathing and moans nd soon I shot my cum down her throat which sent her over the edge and made her cum too.She just got up,layed in my arms and looked deep in my eyes."I love you Brian"She gave me a kiss and I went for it forgetting she still had my cum in her mouth.We both fell to slepp on the couch with her in my arms
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it still says there are mistakes I need to correct unfortunately english isnt my fist language so i cant find any ways to fix it myself thats what I need your help for
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