Need help with proof reading

Hello

I just started writing about my sex experiences and my story was returned for correcting the grammar and also seeking out for proofreading. Can someone please help me out?

Sara

Hi Sara,

I can take a look if you like, im not the greatest, but after some early issues my stories generally don’t get returned for grammatical reasons, and I have 14 published stories

I have messaged you the same, blush it’s my true story so got a little overwhelmed, please comment in message only as I don’t want the story revealed earlier.

Thanks for your help.

Sara

I couldn’t respond you back as I have limited messaging ability in a day, will interact tomorrow. Thanks again for all your help and wishes

Sara