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11 Jan 2011

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3 Jan 2011

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5 Jan 2011

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5 Jan 2011

Thank you Lady Sharon.

5 Jan 2011

Thank you now I just need inspriation to finish writing it LOL

6 Jan 2011

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Thank you now I just need inspriation to finish writing it LOL

It always helps me to read stories, it gets my creative juices flowing. Also, you may enjoy this thread...
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