This is a very interesting post.
The key thing is that the reader knows what is going on without thinking about it. You want them to access the story, be immersed by it, not flicking back and forth trying to figure out who said what or who did what. For example, if you're writing a lesbian scene, you can't use 'she said' for extended conversations. However, if you give your characters distinctive voices / behaviour, you can dispense with almost all indications of blah said / did this as it becomes obvious to the reader without conscious thought.
Reading on a screen is much more difficult for the eye than reading a book or a magazine. I deliberately write shorter, choppier paragraphs when I know that it's going to be read on a screen.
Italics can be effective for 'zooming inside the thoughts' of a character during the action.
The only time it gets awkward is when it's the driver of the bus doing it too...
Just adding to the above advice - you could try a Penis Sleeve. They can add both length and girth and massively increase the stimulation to your important parts during intercourse. It might be difficult to introduce the idea without bruising his ego though.
It sounds like you have a good relationship, which is a great start - plus you're already having regular sex. The key is always communication. You need to talk; you need to let her know how you feel and find out what your partner is feeling about your suggestions. Maybe there is something she wants to try.
It isn't fair to expect anyone to try something that they aren't comfortable with, so you should never push anyone into something by saying 'just try it'.
It's hot at the moment, so nothing.
Recently - during a conference call. Otherwise the previously-mentioned combination of public locations usually on buses and around work.
It's still to do it on the bus. Apparently.
Special congratulations to Liz and Jack but very well done to all the other writers who took part.
A special mention for Sweet_as_Candy's 'The Stripper's Revenge' - I'm so glad that Nicola has mentioned you as being shortlisted. It's a wonderful story that deserved to be told.
I'd accidentally tip a hot drink onto the lap of the mate every time he flirted with me and then go and have sex with my man.
Not really bothered how old someone is when I meet them - it's just a number that you find out later.
A friend of a colleague at work has just had the most ill-advised tattoo I've ever seen. The size of my palm on his right chest - a game of thrones house direwolf shield, which is bad enough, but I had to point out that she had missed the shield from behind the wolf's mouth, the shield didn't 'line-up' around the wolf and she'd spelled 'Direwolf' as two separate words 'Dire Wolf'. "Yeah well, this was her first tattoo," he says.
My fantasies are way dirtier than that.
I'm enjoying MasterChef Australia
If I lost my virginity now I'd be a lot older than I was and I'd probably scare the life out of him!! My first time was really good.
Creep - Radiohead (my thanks to Rune)
In my experience Lush Stories members are much hornier than 'normal' - that's why they're here and that is a big part of what Lush is all about... but Lush is more than that, which is the part that some people really connect to. It's a friendly, active community with loads fun goings on.
I'd be planning a marketing campaign for my new-found miracle cock-grow.
