Affect vs Effect (or just giving up altogether and using the word 'impact' instead)
I looked back down at her, still struggling to believe what was happening. She was nodding at me, her eyes wide with fear and lust and excitement. I pulled up, lifting my ass high into the air, and then plunged deep inside with a single stroke. She let out a long, contended moan.
She opened her eyes and a grin crept across her lips as she admired my rock-hard cock. Slowly, her eyes led mine down her body. Her breasts heaved up and down as her breathing grew heavier. Her hand undulated beneath her Levis and the band of her bright yellow panties stuck out.
Great read. Looking forward to the next instalment!
derriere, rear, behind, tush, tushie, firm ass, magnificent ass, glorious ass...
Nice beginning and set-up. Why no series intentions? You should persevere.
A few more that came to me in my sleep (for pussy): entrance, cleft, sex, forest
Congratulations! Amazing achievement!
Hi - I've read mixed reports about the types of images Amazon accepts vs rejects for use as book covers on Amazon. Part of the confusion seems to stem from Amazon's changing rules. I saw a post from 2014 saying anything with cleavage or straight arse is relegated to Amazon dungeon (and the book won't show on Amazon's search engine).
Is anyone aware of the latest rules? Does the below suggestive image go to far?
Thanks for clarifying everyone. Sounds like the Oxford dictionary needs to add an additional meaning!
I recently tagged one of my stories in which a stepmother and her son embark on an illicit affair behind the Dad's back, "cuckold". One of the first comments was from an irritated reader who gave it a 2 and explained it wasn't cuckold.
I've always understood the term to mean "a man or woman who has been cheated on by their spouse" (as per Othello), but am starting to realise in porn / erotica it is exclusively used to describe the hotwife genre in which a husband gets aroused from watching his wife screw another man and enjoys the humiliation on a certain level.
Is the latter the correct definition or is it fair to tag a story involving cheating (in which the husband is not happy about it) as "cuckold"?
I like the feminist take on it Wicked Jocelyn. I'd read that story.
@PhilU, I think Campbell's entire point is that every story fits into his generic framework in one way or another. But I'm not convinced by his argument.
Good erotica is about relationships and sex, but the reader needs a story to keep them interested. If they just wanted straight sex, they'd be on Porn Hub along with everyone else.
Thanks everyone for your thoughts. Appreciate it.
So, in summary:
- Abigail Thornton (3 votes and her bibliography is indeed prolific)
- Dancing_Doll
- Jaymal
- Saucymh
- JefferyB
- Verbal
I also did a bit of poking around and it looks like RubiRosa69 has been busy with their Samson series. As has burquette. Curvygalore also seems to have made a fair go at it. Any others to have been missed?
@naughtyannie - I deliberately left 'success' open to interpretation, but for me it probably means size and loyalty of followership.
All very inspiring, but certainly not planning to quit my day job...
Makes sense. Thanks NaughtyAnnie and Impurethoughts.