As for you as a writer I think that all possible rewrites of your own stories are good. But rewriting perspective is some work. It's not a matter of replacing "me" with "her"or "us" with "them." To decide on what perspective, as I see it is to decide upon from the beginning. I have a suggestion though.
Why not write the same story, from the other main person's view. (or if you have many other persons in it, from one of theirs.)
Might make for a good follow up read, for your fans.
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Your last comment on this thread made me think of this video and song. Too bad I couldn't embed it. Here's the link anyhow:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZyTOROlo9E&
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZyTOROlo9E&
Internet Sensation
We could have a more specific voting system or add a more specific one next to the one we already got.
I got the idea from this Poetry site in Swedish, and it's really helpful to see what you might need to work on.
Also, it helps a person not get beaten up by an over all 3 when he/she gets a 5 in one of the categories.
The categories they use are:
Language
Structure
Overall
Expression/emotion
I got the idea from this Poetry site in Swedish, and it's really helpful to see what you might need to work on.
Also, it helps a person not get beaten up by an over all 3 when he/she gets a 5 in one of the categories.
The categories they use are:
Language
Structure
Overall
Expression/emotion
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Hehe, BB I'm sure it could send enough vibrations to get a sexually frustrated woman off. ;)
I once had a lot of toys, then I got a boyfriend and got even more toys. When we broke up I threw them all out cause he asked me to.
Now I don't understand why I did it, I could have just said I had done it and kept them.
My newest addition is a pussy pump.
I once had a lot of toys, then I got a boyfriend and got even more toys. When we broke up I threw them all out cause he asked me to.
Now I don't understand why I did it, I could have just said I had done it and kept them.
My newest addition is a pussy pump.
Internet Sensation
http://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst15001_Ever-gotten-enemas.aspx
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Yes, it might go against human nature, but there are other animals that do get "married" or at least live together through their entire lives.
I think the thought behind marriage is great, it's simply crowd control. (giggles)
I really look up to people who manage to stick together.
My great grandparents were married for 70 years
Edit: Rain is sort of made in heaven...
I think the thought behind marriage is great, it's simply crowd control. (giggles)
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Marriage can be a beautiful thing. My folks are celebrating 44 years of marriage today.
I really look up to people who manage to stick together.
My great grandparents were married for 70 years
Edit: Rain is sort of made in heaven...
