Quote by Reprehensiballs
I've only written the one story so far, but in my mind I was there and of course I was very aroused. Oddly enough though, re-reading the story afterwards was not as erotic so I was very grateful for all the positive feedback. It's nice to know you're doing something right, and I suspect very difficult to judge it for yourself.

Quote by obscura
Don't use too much overemphasis, at all. There's absolutely no need, whatsoever.



Now, well now I'm just confused. I understand capitals is yelling and emoticons are well... unnecessary at the best of times. But overemphasis? my life was founded on this stuff. lol

Quote by Monocle
I tweeted these many moons ago:

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I trace the lines of her body with my eyes, archiving. Fixing her like this in my mind. I have to, because, at some point, I will untie her.

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Go on, keep it up, smiling like that, Miss Strapless-and-Sandals. Spy on me from the corners of your eyes. But careless. I'll eat you alive.

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I see the hesitation in her eyes. She's guessing at who I am. Whether she can trust me. She can't. She shouldn't. I smile when she says yes.

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You shouldn't be smiling. You've no idea what you do to me- what you've awakened in me. It scares _me_. It should scare the hell out of you.