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The sensation feels good. You slide your fingers over all that wet pussy goodness, why not your cock? It's a very different feeling: thick, hard, but still soft and smooth. The fingers and toys simply cannot feel the same way no matter what. It's also a tease.

For the smacking. Another sensation. It brings blood to the surface of the skin, making contact more sensitive. A slightly swollen pussy is a good pussy.

I like the sound of a sweet, wet smack there, too. For whatever reason - it's hot.

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They're Alexander McQueen's 'Peep-toe Moto Boot', circa 2010. Aren't they stunning? You could probably find them around the net if you looked. I think this design has been done by McQueen for a few seasons now with various updates to the original.






Here's another variation from the same line.

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I understand what you are saying. Like getting this...

i think it needs to be better and not as much talking and more sex with the girl and her brother join in to it would be better is the brother join also more pussy description and treat the girl like a goddess and the brother having sex to with his sister is awesome xx

...like, that would be annoying.

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They aren't talking about changing the system. They are talking about adding an option for critiques if an author wants.

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For me, part of a good critique involves how the story made the reader feel. Some write, "I liked this". Why? To me, critique is not all about technicalities and correct grammar, but the atmosphere and emotion a good story or poem can evoke. My favourite writers pull emotion from me, or let me wear theirs for a while. In my opinion, a person who can read or listen to a story is just as qualified as anybody else to say what they think could improve it or not.

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Meh.

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