A 50 year old drug taking child molester
who dished out candy to the kiddies ...
Paul Francis Gadd (Garry Glitter)
was the same but did not have the money to buy his way out
Neither rate much in my book
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DBarclay
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 156
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Mr Nobody
He had a quick shag with some old slapper who made it available ...
FFS 80% of men would do the same ....it meant nothing ..just unloading...
it happens ..he did not kill anybody...just did want his body instincts told hiim to do
All men have done it or thought about it ...
FFS 80% of men would do the same ....it meant nothing ..just unloading...
it happens ..he did not kill anybody...just did want his body instincts told hiim to do
All men have done it or thought about it ...
Mr Nobody
Quote by SinfulOne82
Ok being new this I need help and I'm relying on you guys for advice. Outside of lush I have created many great stories that people love. I love sex and am a equally good writer so I thought hey why not. I posted my last story and got told words are my power point but need help otherwise. Please read my stories (if u wish) and tell me what I can do to improvise on this or should I just go back to regular stories?
Thanx
Scarlet
The stories OK ...
I only pay great attention to the layout ..there was a couple of spelling mistakes the spellchecker would have picked up
but nothing serious ....this is how I would layout the last paragraph
He then lays next to me on the massage table and says I want to see you again. I say that I would like that very much he give me his room number and gets dressed. He apologizes about the ripping of my clothes and I say.
"There is no need to feel bad I keep a spare here."
It was a nice dress from nights out when i didn't have time to go home and get changed and they had a shower here so I quickly showered after I said goodbye as we kissed. I put on my dress and tidied up a bit in the room and then left. My co-worker Carla said.
"Are you sure you are ok Chicky? You look awfully flushed." I just looked at her and smiled and she said
"I KNEW IT." She practically shrieked it.
I just looked at her with my questioning eyes and said "Know what?" She looked as happy as a puppy dog going for a ride with their master and said.
"You got laid by Jason didn't you." I walked quicker not answering her. She caught up with me and said.
"No biggy hun shit I would have too if I were not already married but here is the thing, I met my man the same way."
She put her arm around me and we walked out and locked up. I saw Jason later on that night and things went from there.
Mr Nobody
Ok time for the hand wringing bridgade to sally forth
and tell me if this is a fair comment ...
Personally I though he was being basically spot on
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/incest/brother-did-it-well.aspx#comments
and tell me if this is a fair comment ...
Personally I though he was being basically spot on
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/incest/brother-did-it-well.aspx#comments
Mr Nobody
Well there we are ....photographic evidence Rocco uses the hammer to show his mighty power to his
followers ... and of course the red band indicated one thing:
The Red Menace... commie power...
Add his ramblings.. and we get to find out who roccotool really is
Of course he really is ... Fidel Castro
followers ... and of course the red band indicated one thing:
The Red Menace... commie power...
Add his ramblings.. and we get to find out who roccotool really is
Of course he really is ... Fidel Castro
Mr Nobody
Replace with best swedish quality .... The Iris is well recommended
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David......
Mr Nobody
Quote by Lisa
This thread's been an interesting read!
To be honest I can't remember seeing any offensive/brutal comments left at the end of any stories here. People seem to be generally pretty polite and if anything heap on the praise. The constructive feedback I've seen has always been well delivered.
If I received a comment that had an attacking tone to it, I'd either leave it there to encourage other readers to agree or give an opposing view (it'd give me a better idea of how the story is being received) or click on 'report offensive post'.
Im sorry Lisa ... I will have to ask you to leave this thread ... there is no room for sensible smart intelligent
rational people ... just those who have a beef about something we cannot find ...
But to lighten our lives ..a little ditty just in ...(true! No idea)
Outside Bristol Zoo there is a carpark where cars and coaches
can park. There was also a nice bloke with a hat and ticket machine
charging cars £1 and coaches £5.This parking attendent worked there for
about 25 years , then one day didn't turn up for work...Ho hum say Bristol
Zoo management- Better phone up Bristol City Council and get them to send
a new parking attendant......
Er no say the Council...That car park is your responsibility...Er no say
Bristol Zoo the attendant was employed by you wasn't he....Er NO!!!!
Sitting in his villa in Spain is bloke who had been taking the car park
takings for Bristol Zoo for the last 25 years... at up to £400 a day
Mr Nobody
Quote by techgoddessQuote by DBarclayQuote by techgoddess
[, provided it is meant for the purpose of providing feedback and not to pounce on a writer who was brave enough to post a story.
Can you point us to a example of where a pouncing occured
I wasn't talking to you. I was expressing my opinion about what Durrasch wrote.
Don't try pushing me out of the argument ... Iv'e helped this thread through 4 pages ....
I reckon we can stretch it to about 6 ...could you stomp you feet a bit and demand something
Mr Nobody
Quote by lexyloveQuote by DBarclay
Although I noticed I believe you got castigated for a comment recently... unjustly I though...
omg ..perhaps its you they are talking about ...hang you head in shame child ...lol
DANGIT!! EXPOSED!!
Where is that non-clique member! I want blood!
You need Kinghorn ....
