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New goal

Make one of these lists.

*scribbles furiously*


Good luck! I've tried for sometime, and have conceded that I do not have the writing chops to make these lists. Fortunately for me, I consider myself MUCH more a reader than a writer, so I still win biggrin
Catching up on the episodes I've missed tonight. I forgot how good this series is.
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thank you for reading some of mine.. smiles




Anytime smile I try to read a bit from everyone. The ones I read were nice, I'd say you show talent and promise. But it's easy to get stuck in a rut, writing the same thing again and again. I agree with everything sprite, milik, and I said. Branch out. Try something new. It'll be good for your writing.
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I love this show...cant wait to see the next installment.... there are some differences in the books.. In the books there is not the gay male interactions


It's there, just not quite as open about it. But loras/renly were distinctly a couple.
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Factors. I wonder what those could be.




Work, sleep, How wet my couch currently is , when I was last allowed to touch
Sometimes I spend all day doing nothing else. Sometimes I don't at all. Depends on what else is going on in my life. So many factors affect it.
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I want to by one for my wife, and surprise her in bed. Any recomendations.


A lelo
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Me too about the poetry.

But sometimes I had no one in mind..some were for someone specific, and it had to be written..



Keep writing what you feel you must, but sometimes channeling that in a different direction can be good for your growth as a writer.
Ill be honest, I haven't read them. Poetry is one of those things that I have to be in the mood for. But I'll look. I don't mind a bit of sad in my poems. Many if mine are because I tend to write poetry from a very real personal place, and from a place of great emotion.

I would agree with milik, he gave excellent advice. Try the flash erotica division and write something that appeals to you. Write to satisfy yourself and it will show.
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Thank you..smiles

Well, I'm definately not normal.

Then I must be viewed as some disturbing monster then I guess.

The last 2 or 3 were older ones from long ago. I stated that.

One must think of all the things I'm not saying..

Cause actually there's more I want to say but don't..


Thanks for your input and advice!!



I don't think anyone said you were a disturbing monster, but it's this type of fatalistic thinking that might lead people to pigeon hole you. Write how you feel of course, but I like to change it up a little. If you wallow in emo poems with little to relieve them, don't be surprised if you get called the sad girl.

Push your range! Try a story perhaps. I find my favorite stories are written by people who can write amazing poetry. They manage to portray their emotions in a way I can connect with.


*shrugs* what's normal anyway?
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Ok so I'm here pretty much exclusively to read stories, and I visit on what I would consider a fairly regular basis so I read quite a few stories.

My question is why does it seem like in nearly every story I read the female orgasm is represented through squirting when in reality only a portion of women actually experience this on a regular basis? I can't help but feel like it's a bit over the top, but maybe that's just me.

If your an author who often writes stories where this occurs perhaps you could shed some light on the topic and illuminate me as to why it appears to be so prevalent in stories, particularly those involving oral sex.


The female leads in my stories get very wet, although I wouldn't say the squirt. This is because that has been my experience with the female orgasm.
An honest answer for you:

Everything we submit leaves is judged. Do people view Ashleigh as the "dirty girl" because her stories feature raunchy sex? Undoubtably. I myself get buttonholed. How many people message me wanting to know about more of my dirty nurse stories, they assume that's who I am. I try to post a variety of stories and poems then to balance this. Because human nature is such that we judge people. Since in this medium we don't have physical things to add to it we judge by your work.

So if you post continually about the pitfalls of love, of your broken heart and other emo stuff, you'll get pigeonholed. Right or wrong. Of course, you don't help this by making all of your forum posts as disturbing as your poetry. If you want to be taken as a poet with a range, start to push your comfort level a bit. Do you have an experience that left you happy? Content? Maybe writing a few times about those could help change your image.

I myself worried when I posted my last story. it's so far from my typical fare; I worried people might really dislike it and I would chase off my normal readers. I also stress anytime I post a poem. I feel very vulnerable about my poetry in a way I don't for stories. Then I worry my story readers won't take me serious if I post poems. Everyone worries about something. Find your comfort level, find the readers you want, and don't stress the rest. Although, I always advocate for pushing your limits smile
Sprite- she writes in a winsome style that leaves me interested and involved, lots of character development in her stories. here is one to check out

Dancing Doll- again, another auther who pulls me into her writing, makes me care about the characters and more importantly, I want to know what happens next! Here is one to check out

Magical felix- his pacing is suburb, it pulls me further and further into the story.BsoOOMr7R8XI

Delphi- she throws you into the action and then like a riptide pulls you farther into it. try this one


I also have to add Frank Lee, Lisa, and Lady X as favorites.
My first was a blow job. But it happened the same night I had vaginal sex.



Remember when posting to stay within the rules. No posts about please!
When I am happy with it. If I'm still tweaking, I'm not ready to post.
I love sandalwood essential oil. Makes me a little nuts, like a cat in heat honestly. There are other scents that smell great and can add to my enjoyment: the spicy salty smell of a clean man working. Fresh grass/hay, oil- a clean garage, baking bread, grilled ribs.

Turn offs? Gear grease. That red shit turns my stomach. Dirty human- not wow I worked hard today smell but the I-haven't bathed in days scent. C diff. Pseudomonas. Mildew.
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Last weekend I had a friend who is a make-up artist play around with my face for fun before going out. She has the best make-up collection ever. Anyway she got me to try a stronger lip. My default has always been neutral gloss with emphasis on my eyes. But - I loved what she did with some of the fun/bold lip colours with lipsticks she had by Lime Crime (a popular indie brand out of L.A. that a lot of the celeb set like Katy Perry and Adele have been picking up on).



I love the look of the suedeberry, looks like I have something new to go buy
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Right? Though I'm partial to Eric. Something about that built, Nordic male...






Yes Please!!

(but I'd accept Bill as a consolation prize )


who wouldn't love to have these guys? drag teeth across inflamed skin, to nip, bit, and fuck? Yes Please!
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He's the janitor, sweetie.

We've tried to stop him wondering into the classes and writing all over the blackboards, but it's no use.

Just go with it.

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This was a very interesting critique, Steph. You actually dissected the poem much in the same way as I did the second time I read it. (No one should consider all of these elements when reading something for the FIRST time. I think you should just immerse yourself in the language and enjoy it.)

I am a fan myself of implementing nature as a metaphor. Whether it be a magnificent sunrise or a fierce storm, it is a powerful and beautiful thing, and can be used in endless ways to convey a feeling or emotion.

I'm also glad you picked out one of my favourite lines in the piece, "Creating a space where love can die..." - That is a really thought provoking sentiment. Doesn't it always feel like that when you tell a lie to a loved one? Like each one creates a tiny little crack in a perfect surface. It is the space between the lies, the cracks, through which love can be lost.

I'd love to see more of this sort of work from you.

Liz xx


Now one of yours please miss smile