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Dirty_D
Over 90 days ago
Pan Female, 47
0 miles · Ocala
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Head Nurse
here you go, I dont know if its the story you are looking for, but this one might be just the ticket: lesbian, bar, the barmaid takes the girl.
Settle For Nothing
Settle For Nothing
Head Nurse
Quote by daddysweetheart
this is the worst place to look. I don't recommend it at all.
So, you've decided on this page alone that yes you can find love, maybe you can find love, you should be cautious about it, and that it's an awful idea? Gee can't wait for more of this continuing soap opera <- written in my best sarcasm font.
Head Nurse
I would say it's less the plot, then how it's presented. Complex characters are ones I can care about, but if your story incorporates to much "tell" without enough "show" it becomes difficult to care about/be interested in the character. The 50 shades stories incorporate too many of these reader speed bumps. They make the story less interesting then it could be. If you compare ms. James style with say the beauty series by ms rice, you will see the difference a master storyteller brings.
But, mind you I'm of the write-because-I-have-story-to-tell camp. I write to release the characters from my head. I want to improve my craft so that I can present those stories better, but I'm not going to fashion my story to suit a reader. I write to suit me.
You might notice that the story I wrote for this competition (flat out) is completely different the. I normally write. You could say I should have written it differently, after all, it's not what most of my followers like. But it was what the story needed, and as such I'm happy with it; even if I sacrificed views/votes/comments.
But, mind you I'm of the write-because-I-have-story-to-tell camp. I write to release the characters from my head. I want to improve my craft so that I can present those stories better, but I'm not going to fashion my story to suit a reader. I write to suit me.
You might notice that the story I wrote for this competition (flat out) is completely different the. I normally write. You could say I should have written it differently, after all, it's not what most of my followers like. But it was what the story needed, and as such I'm happy with it; even if I sacrificed views/votes/comments.
Head Nurse
Quote by 1LovelyKinkyKitsune
I am big on hygiene. Feminine hygiene is important but {^like the post above me said} not some weird masking thing or unnatural, etc. I was taught about the douche thing when I was young and yet found it about as attractive to me and needed as an enima. I have seen stories about the latter, as a fetish of authors HERE on Lush and read it in a story. I have not ever needed to do either one and found out that it really isn't nessicary to be "fresh." I prefer a shower anyway, (bidet's are great or shower massagers for that sort work too).
However~ when reading a story, (any story, especially fiction and fantasy fiction) I really find it hard to swallow that no one EVER goes to the bathroom on these long journey's, not even to pee, and no mishaps EVER transpire as a result. I think it could be used to an authors advantage to write with more of a realistic feel and ring of truth to include 'some' bits IF it helps the story and seems to naturally fit. I am not saying that it must always have graphic or egregious details- only such as is really a plus.
Douching might not be realistic for everyone or a practice of the character... it isn't for me, and I doubt it would be for any character in my writing, but you might find certain 'other' things slipped in there. Plus~ I simply do not find it attractive. It would be what works for the story.
And I absolutely DETEST the smell of vinegar-nor do I want my privates rinsed in that as some douche's are vinegar & I don't care how much my mom uses it for everything.
I prefer my natural ~ clean, shower freshness. PH or scent has not been a problem for me.
A couple things about this post: there are very good reasons why a person might require an enema, it's not actually for hygiene. It's to stimulate a bowel movement.
Vinegar is very natural, essentially it's soured fruit juice.
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Quote by SereneProdigy
I met many girls who had fordyce spots on their outer labia, in fact. It never bothered me, yet if I could choose I'd go without.
And yet when I'm with someone, it is because they are more then simply the sum of their parts. So thus, if my partner had a skin condition, I'm fairly certain I'd handle it.
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Quote by NightMan
In the old days women wore hat pins they are still available though probably hard to find. Tie your hair in A bun & use the pin to hold it in place.It's not very noticeable & easy to reach. You would be surprised how effective A good jab with A hat pin can be. Especially if you can catch him in the throat or the groin.
I wish you Good Luck & Good Aim.quZwIFzmYrb7ViAw
I actually have a couple pairs of sharpened porcupine quills that I wear in my hair. and they are very sharp. They easily pass through skin and muscles.
