Standard convention is that, in fiction, there should not be two quotes from two different characters in the same paragraph, which means that when a different person starts speaking, it should always start a new paragraph. So, \"How much do you want it," she teased. "Very much please," he begged.\ is incorrect, and, in my opinion, confusing. It should be spaced:
"How much do you want it?" she teased.
"Very much please," he begged.
Since it's difficult to indent on the internet, I like to put a new line between line breaks, like this:
"How much do you want it?" she teased.
"Very much please," he begged.
I think more white space makes it easier to read and less confusing.
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Doorway
Over 90 days ago
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I am interested in editing some pieces, but I'm unsure of how to go about soliciting as such, and would especially like to try to find writers who abide by at least the spirit if not the letter of what you have said here. Do you have any advice on how it's best to go about offering my services as an editor?