Just an opinion, lead with a hot steamy sex scene, no setup at all, and no resolution. after the first paragraph or two, then start the story. Who are these people, how did we get her.

Quote by doctorlove
I saw a friend take a long neck beer bottle , a full bottle, tip it up and swallow most of it and in a few seconds pulled it out and the bottle was empty. I was floored, excited and had a different kind of respect for her after that. I thought she was a good girl before that...

I've had it done to me once and it's amazing

Even more impressive the cap was still on when she started

McGovern Park in the woods. We skipped that afternoon

I enjoy a good naughty chat, but like to read as much as I write