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Over 90 days ago
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Ltirashin: Thank you for your help. I do try to get into the characters' heads. That's why I enjoyed writing my other stories ("Jenna & Keith" and "Pam Was Bored"). Like you, your stories are very original because of your sci-fi/fantasy motif. BTW, when I say my sex life isn't exciting, it's that I'm not very adventurous in the bedroom. I read all these stories and I'm thinking to myself, I've never done anything like this or that before. But I like what you say about using all five senses. It's not something I would have thought of. I have similar issues with my non-erotic work. I was writing what I hoped would be a novel when I ran into a block that I couldn't seem to get past. I think part of it is that I get too frustrated too quickly. Gotta stop doing that.

As for Tonic, Bite me! lol
How do you write sex scenes so that they don't sound like other sex scenes? I try to be original and creative in my stories, but my sex scenes are starting to sound so repetitive, forced, and ordinary. Any help would be appreciated, but please don't say I should write from my own personal experiences... my sex life is not what you'd call exciting.

Thanks.
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Money (that's what I want) - the Beatles

And after I get my money, what should we do?
"Strike me down with all of your hatred and your journey toward the Dark Side will be complete." --The Emperor, Star Wars: Return of the Jedi
"Do you expect me to talk? No, Mr. Bond, I expect you to die." Goldfinger
"Oh baby, you are so talented. And they are so dumb." --The Sheriff, Blazing Saddles

Casablanca has more lines than I care to count:
"Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine."
"You played it for her, you can play it for me. Play it!"
"Round up the usual suspects."
"If you don't get on that plane, you're gonna regret it. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but soon and for the rest of your life."
"Louie, this may be the start of a beautiful friendship."
67 years since that movie came out, and we're still quoting it.
How many union workers does it take to screw in a lightbulb?
17. It's in the contract!

How many mobsters does it take to screw in a lightbulb?
10. You got a problem wit dat?

How many HMO managers does it take to screw in a lightbulb?
3. One to find a bulb specialist, one to find a bulb installation specialist, and one to order the referral.

How many lab mice does it take to screw in a lightbulb?
2, but it's hard to get them in there.
I would never write about beastiality. Come to think of it, I'd never read about beastiality.
Don't think I could write about criminal sexuality (unless the victim becomes a hero), BDSM, or gay male sex either.
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I know you asked the ladies, but I have to throw in my two-cents worth.
Pet peeves? Here are a few:
1. people who drive their SUVs recklessly because they think the size will protect them.
2. people who pronounce words wrong. i mean, when people ax me a question, i get fustrated.
3. people who do anything for attention.
4. people who insist on driving 50 mph in a 65 mph zone.
5. people who don't give a rat's ass about other people.