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HotWife4U
Over 90 days ago
Bi-curious Female
United States

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Quote by avrgblkgrl
I think that you answered your own question, professional writer's do it all the time. The student simply failed to do it well.
If you are going to give something like that a shot and it is beyond your familiarity, research it. So much is available now.
People share their experiences freely. A little imagination and empathy can go a long way. If you are not going to dedicate
the time and care it is going to take to do it well, then don't bother. That goes for anything outside of your personal comfort
zone of knowledge. What would not be socially acceptable is to misrepresent the lifestyle or the characters, to demean them
with ineptness. No one wants to see their culture misrepresented. I find that offensive personally. But keep in mind that even
within a labelled group there are individuals. Each individual's experience is different. It would be hard for someone to say
that's not possible if the writer has done a good job of telling his story. The reader feels whatever the writer wants them to
feel and beyond--if the writer is good.

Don't reach further than you are willing to stretch.




The roughly 600 drafts?!



Good advice. I've submitted a few stories but they have been autobiographical. I am working on my first story writing first person from a male perspective. I am using broad guesses as to a mans point of view. My first draft I had some one read and they said it was good but I feminized the character. it is harder than I thought.
I cant judge you for your sexual exploits outside the vows of your marriage. We live an open marriage life style. However we are honest and communicate with each other. Share your fantasies with her. Cheating usually ends up badly.
You opened the door. It's you that will have to close it.... If you want it closed that is.
I miss my best friend that died a year ago from cancer. And I miss my dog peaches that died of kidney failure.


Well... It involves a crew of firemen, a bucket of melted chocolate, handcuffs, strobe lights, and a stiff paddle.
18 months and you haven't asked? Really? "I think what we have here, is a failure to communicate."


Both have there place. I like a bit of sweet wine before bed. A dry wine with my dinner.

After four glasses I could give a fuck what color it is.
I'll do it to please my lover but in all honesty it is a pain in the ass. Lol.
It's a learned taste. At first I spit but now swallow. I understand it's good protein.
1. Hear alarm and curse it out.
2. Pee like a Russian race horse.
3. Put on work out clothes make coffee and get paper
4. Go for jog and get in shower after.
5. Wash hair and shave legs if necessary.
6. Blow dry and curlers.
7. Wake hubby that ignored alarm.
8. Finish dressing and eat my granola.
9. Makeup and lip gloss.
10. Check schedule and plan day.
Quote by BethanyFrasier
My boyfriend loves having sex with me after another guy has cum inside me, so I almost always get creampied, and take it back to my boyfriend to enjoy.


All I can say is ditto.
Actually the first three days I'm cramping so bad sex is not on my mind at all. A mans best friend is his dog, mine is Advil... Extra strength. After the cramps are gone shower sex is an option. My flow is usually light toward the end. He's huge so anal is not an option.
Beautiful pictures. Glad you had a wonderful time. I also had no clue about Spain being close to Africa. Welcome home.
I'm gonna start a procrastinators club... First thing tomorrow. I'm also going on the procrastinators diet plan also. Not to mention those procrastinator cookies I've been planning to bake.

Well enough of this silliness. I've got things to do.... In a while.
Well, what if it were the other way. He married you as a virgin and then you started adding the kinky stuff? Then suddenly you realize you're a hot wife, and... loving it.