Could someone respond or give me some feedback?

My story “Silent Sparks In The College Library” was recently published. It’s about a college boy and girl who meet in the library, and end up in her dorm. If anyone is interested, I’d appreciate some feedback. Thanks!

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/college-sex/silent-sparks-in-the-college-library-2

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It takes about one minute to count and see that there were 88 entries. 😉 You're welcome.

In my defence, I'm too lazy to count😉. But wow, that is a lot of entries. No wonder they needed additional time

I can only imagine how long it's taken to judge all the entries. Didn't count how many people had entered, but it looks like there were quite a few

Oh, sorry about that! How did I miss that?

Yes, it was the rough draft of an essay for school… yeah, it wasn’t pretty. But thankfully I remembered I had also saved it somewhere else. Crisis averted!

HYE befriended someone you met at camp… and then run into them in a completely different city?

Probably the early 2000s. Newgrounds, MSN Messenger, MySpace, etc. Fun times lol

What was the first viral video you remember watching?

This was a fun challenge; I'm glad I tried it. And congrats to the winners and everyone who participated

You need to click preview, and then click the submit button at the bottom of that page. And the wait could be anywhere from 3 days to a week. Considering that you don't appear to be a paid member, expect to wait a week (if not more)

I already started one a couple years ago. Aside from my hobbies and friends (ie., music, anime, my dogs, etc.), I also go over the origins of certain fet!shes. Which aren’t far from “dirty laundry.”

What was the first movie you remember watching/enjoying?

I recently wrote a story called "Her Damned Breasts." It's about a lesbian succubus who transfers to the office of her latest plaything, and gives her a taste of her powers. I admit to taking liberties with succubus folklore, but hopefully it doesn't ruin the story. If this interests you, I'd appreciate a read and your feedback. Thank you!

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/fantasy-sci-fi/her-damned-breasts

A young couple make a New Year's Resolution: they will dry hump, wearing underwear from each other's drawer for added thrill.

Tonight, she slips into his boxers, giggling.

He pulls on her lacy panties, with the material hugging his arousal tightly.

Grinding against her, their bodies heated and wanting, he whispers how her scent drives him wild.

Both of them moan, sharing an orgasm.

Then she confesses—those are her sister's, accidentally mixed in.

I'm working on a few story ideas: one is about a lesbian succubus who finds a new plaything (my goal is to upload by the end of the weekend), another is about a college boy who becomes involved with a college girl who uses a wheelchair and has a secret sexual side, and another is about a high school senior who is interested in his best friend's sister.

But I'm not sure what categories they fall under. As of right now, only the lesbian succubus story is close to being finished. And, for that story, I'm leaning towards sci-fi/fantasy or supernatural. For the story involving a college girl wheelchair user, it's less clear which would be the most appropriate. There's a budding interest between the two, but there's also elements of sci-fi/fantasy as it involves (fictional) technologically enhanced panties. And finally, for the story about the high school senior, I'm leaning towards voyeur or masturbation

Considering I don't have any (offline, at least), I don't have to worry about that.

Did you fall asleep before the countdown to New Years?

Never been close enough with somebody for that to happen. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing

HYE been walked in on with your pants down?

Masturbate-a-thon

Have you attempted one?

Katoptronophilia

I haven't had much practice lately, but I think I enjoy it. The last time was when I bought panties from a girl on reddit lol (over a year ago)

I'm glad to have found this site. There are so many talented and kinky writers, and I've enjoyed reading people's stories and interacting with them here. It's been nice to not feel alone for a change lol

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Never even heard of it. I don't use any aids other than my word processor's native grammar and spell-checking. And even those I don't rely on. They help, but they also miss a lot of crap. And nothing can help your imagination. Even AI requires some imagination to come up with the prompt.

Am I overthinking this, then? I'm trying to avoid having to resubmit my story. Last time I had to (for a different story) because I kept mixing up past/present tense, but I think I've got that under control now

Is anyone else using ProWritingAid when editing their stories? The extension is starting to annoy me. On top of not being clear with what they want you to change, they only give you 2 free credits a day per category. And I would pay the $10/month for a subscription, but I don't have much money

I'm working on the second part of my "Teen Friendship" series. And unfortunately, I'm sorta going through writer's block. My aim is to have the second part finished and submitted by the end of the weekend. And without going into too much detail, the second part involves the guy in my story wearing his friend's panties for a week (for reasons that are explained). Since it's my attempt to write a femdom, she's had him take sexy photos while wearing her panties. As well as short clips of himself walking around his school's locker room while wearing her panties.

And so unfortunately, I'm in between a few ideas for how he and his friend finish up his week of wearing panties. But its at this point I'm not even sure if my story is good anymore. I don't want to scrap it obviously (it's over 4000 words), but I'm stuck

I sometimes crossdress (i.e., wear panties), seeing women in their bra and panties is more exciting to me than seeing them naked (although that does excite me as well). Something along those lines.

Was there a "eureka!" moment, or did you just happen to stumble upon your desires out of curiosity? Or both?

Never with someone else, but 20 minutes ago with myself (if that counts)

I'm not sure if I knew anybody well enough to say they "got away," but this one woman I met off a dating app before covid lockdowns might've been the closest. Otherwise, I've had limited experience with women.

What is more likely to happen where you live; a white Christmas or a green Christmas?

Nothing Left - Delain

No, but I wish I had. It would also give me an incentive to learn how to play poker lol

HYE suddenly had a sense of deja vu, but had no idea why?

The cheeky part of me would prematurely say the advent competition winner, but my real answer is lame (to be honest). When I used to take piano lessons, I was given the "most improved student" medal at the piano recital one year. Despite having/still having what I call "stupid fingers."

HYE done something that you swore you'd never do?

Maybe this makes me sound crazy (or Scrooge-like), but no lol. My playlist has mostly stayed metal; Myrath, Diablo Swing Orchestra, Neurotech, etc.

Does anyone dread family get-togethers or the holidays?

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this is a public service announement - if you are entering the comp, please do not forget to hit the entry button when you submit your story. yes, this is a real thing. i've had to fix this for 3 different authors so far... i am NOT your mother, dammit. lol

I appreciate the reminder. Sometimes when I'm excited about something, I forget about certain (even important) things. My plan is to finish my entry by the end of the weekend. And I'll make sure I hit the entry button rather than submit my story the usual way

I have come up with an idea for the advent competition. It's based on Santa's Workshop at the North Pole, but Santa and Mrs Claus decide to open up an 18+ Elf Academy called "Go Elf Yourself." At the Academy, they run courses such as Naughty List Studies, Erotic Toy Design & Prototyping, Elf-on-Elf Relations, etc.

This could easily just be a stupid idea, but I'm willing to see where it goes