I had problems with my first story . I resolved most of the but I have one problem I need advice on . Apparently I have a problem formating dialog between characters . I would like someone to check my next chapter and tell me what I am doing wrongful.
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JimMiller
1 month ago
Straight Male, 66
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I have been working on the next chapter of my very first story . However I had problems getting that story right . I finally got it approved but I do not want to put these folks through something like that again . Let me explain . I have low vision problems so when I am writing someting I add extra spaces so I can see the punctuation . As I have done here . When editing to submit the story I sometimes miss a few spaces . I also sometimes goof on the proper form for conversations . Could I find someone who can proofread for me ??
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My story was rejected because of a writing habit I have . My vision is not good so I add spaces so I can see the punctuation . I also write on a tablet and during editing after it was rejected I apparently brushed the keyboard with a finger that resulted in random characters being inserted . I spent time going through it several times and resubmitted it and have not heard back . My question is can I delete the original submission and carefully edit my draft saved on my tablet get it straightened out and then submit it again as a new story submission ?
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My wife died 5 years ago so masturbating is my only release . On a normal day I slip on my cock ring watch a little porn put on my nipple clamps and jerk off . Once a week only so I don'don't lose my mind doing it is go in the bathroom soap up a washrag to get ready slip on my ring , put on my clamps squirt some warming jell into my palm and start sliding my hand up and down my cock . The shock that hits me when my hand slides over the glans of my cock almost knocks me to the floor . I have a massive orgasm doing this .
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Latest news from the CDC is that 80 % of the new cases of Covid are now the Delta varient which apparently came out of India . They are saying that the infection Rate is up 63% since July .
I have a friend who is a nurse , her brother and three co-worker's who were vaccinated have reinfected with the Delta varient . She says that where she works 3 of the ER staff that were vaccinated have now come down with the Delta varient .
Looks like my hesitancy to stop wearing a mask when I go into stores May have not been so stupid .
I have a friend who is a nurse , her brother and three co-worker's who were vaccinated have reinfected with the Delta varient . She says that where she works 3 of the ER staff that were vaccinated have now come down with the Delta varient .
Looks like my hesitancy to stop wearing a mask when I go into stores May have not been so stupid .
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Let me add to my previous comment . I also have 2 series of Bobby pins that I use . One large set of smooth Bobby pins that I put on my nipples for a little while . A set of standard small rippled Bobby pins that I occasionally put on my nipples when I go to the store . I wear them while I am driving to the store then when I get there i reach under my shirt and slide them off which adds to the pleasure . I went to the hardware store and bought two small spring clamps and two alligator cilps. I have large nipples , the spring clamps fit completely over my nipples and I wear them for a few moments . The alligator chips I can only stand for a few seconds. My clover clamps because of my large nipples will only fit on the tips of my nipples . Occasionally , for added stimulation I will hang a wrench oh the chain connecting the clamps to add to the streatch. I love my clover clamps .
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OK , a man here . I am a 64 yo male widower . My wife died 5 years ago . I LOVE having my nipples played with . My wife would play with my nipples when we had sex . She would occasionally given me a hand job while sucking and licking my nipples. I play with my nipples a lot , rubbing , pitching, pulling. I have a bullet vibe that I use to tease my nipples . I have a set of clover clamps that I put on my nipples . I wear them up to 20 to 30 minutes . They hurt so good. The after effects when I take them off is amazing . The pleasure aspect of some nipple pain is a huge draw for me . So yes I love wearing nipple clamps to give myself some pain . The nipple pain aspect is a huge plus to my sexual activity when I masturbation.