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1 week ago
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Quote by seeker4


Giving a character like that an incongruous name can really set up a nice contrast between reality and expectations. Unfortunately, the reality is that "hellcats" with incongruous names often change their name or go by a nickname. Though discovering that the hot chick you're about to bang is actually named Edna could setup some interesting scenes.


The craziest woman I ever knew - no, I did not come close to banging her - in terms of sex and drugs and other things, was simply named Nancy, and I assume that was her real name. She managed to be a college student and a stripper at the same time, which was probably less common back then (the late 1970s) than it may be now.

There is a long tradition of actors and musicians taking stage names. Years ago it was done partially to hide their ethnic identities, often Italian or Jewish. Nowadays, Lana Del Rey sounds more glamorous than Elizabeth Grant, and Vin Diesel sounds more badass than Mark Sinclair.
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It matters to me, both as reader and writer. If I read a story about a wild hellcat with nipple piercings and a penchant for anal sex in public, it seems incongruous to discover she's called Edna. Not that old names associated with grandmas can't come back in vogue - they do - but a well-chosen name can add to a character's gravitas and finish off the mental imagery.

I do what Ensorceled says, mainly. Pick a name that seems to fit and run with it. Sometimes it sticks, other times Find n' Replace is my friend. And other times, the name defines the story, like in my Flash piece "Holy Trinity".


I like the idea of a hellcat named Edna. It suggests that when her parents named her, they had no idea of what she'd turn into. And let's face it, no one really can know at the beginning what their kids are going to be like.
Since many of them are New Yorkers or living near New York, their ethnic identity is important. Sometimes I look through my high school yearbook for a first name and then a last name. Since my classmates were all New Yorkers, I feel pretty good about the names I pick. Sometimes they have mixed ancestries. A few of them are indeed WASPs. I even had one who was part French-Canadian, which is unusual but not unknown here. For that girl, I picked the last name from the movie Paths of Glory. where everybody is French.
I was already on another site, but I wanted to branch out so I joined about two years ago. Now I'm on three sites and it gives me a variety of choices to post stories without being stuck in one place.
Thank you for all of the help. I should have the first chapter posted near the end of the week and the next one a few days later.
Quote by kiteares

The series name should only be entered on the 1st chapter. Every chapter that is linked back to the 1st one will have the little blue label.

In my experience, I just follow down the page. So:
Category, Title, etc., body,
Click the box 'Group the linked stories as chapters of this story' and add series name (if it's the 1st chapter) or link back if it's the 2nd or subsequent
Copyright box, mod notes, continue.
This will then show the blue label when you are happy with the piece and have pressed publish.
Hope this helps


Sorry, that sort of contradicts what the people above said. The box should be checked only for the first chapter, but if the subsequent chapters don't also have the series name, then how does the software know what they are linked to? Maybe I missed something there.
Thanks, I think I got it - or I'll know for sure in a few days! I gather that entering the series name should be done at the very end - timewise - before posting, because it doesn't remain there when I reopen a story that's in the middle of the editing process.
Thank you for your response. Yes, I have seen the series blue boxes under the titles. When I tried it in drafts mode, it didn't seem to be there, but I suppose that is to be expected. I wasn't surprised to hear about the inability to insert stories in the middle, but that's true on other sites too.
It looks like the title of the story is in effect one of the chapters of the series. In other words, once I check the chapter story box and put the series name in that box - well, what goes in the title box? The same name as the series? The way I'm used to doing it elsewhere is exactly that; each "story" is a numbered chapter with the same name. I hope I explained that clearly.
Congratulations! I know it's a lot of work.

I hope I don't sound like a broken record, but please see my comment on "The Proud and Kinky" competition thread. It was posted yesterday and at the moment it's the last one. Great idea by the way.
I haven't read all 122 entries. However, love does end sooner or later.

My kids were quite young when I got divorced, so my ex and I did have a post-divorce something - not a quite a friendship, but some kind of relationship. Now that our kids are grown, we only talk on the phone every now and again.
Hey Lush, when are you going to announce this contest on the opening pages? There will be at least forty entries for this one, if not more.

By the way, I like the design with the red ball gag. It's very simple yet it captures one's attention.
I thought I'd have to give this one a pass, but then I came up with something. I even have the title.

When is the site going to mention this on the opening page, as they usually do with contests? That's how many of us find out about them.
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This really had me going for a minute! Plus I thought the one on the left end was Robin Willliams so I figured it was from a movie or SNL scene. Very funny shot, thanks - and those nuns sure look right at home at the bar!


I immediately assumed that it was staged - it's a put on. I wish I knew the back story.
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Be extremely careful if you pursue A Student Abroad. *might involve submission, a little force* is a sensitive topic for many of us and is looked at very carefully by the Mods who vet the stories.


I might put that on another site if it's a sensitive subject. Not that I don't love Lush too, but I have different sites for different kinds of stories. I don't want to get into disputes with moderators. I had one story rejected here because of the content. I just published it elsewhere.
You are not entirely clear about a few things. It seems that you witnessed this; you didn't just hear about it, but I'm not sure. Did the couple know you were watching? What were their reactions to your presence? Was there a confrontation of some sort?
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Yeah, readers are a mixed bag.

And what you say about familiar locations is so true. I also like to see places I know referenced in mainstream and literary fiction. It must be great to be a citizen of somewhere like Edinburgh and read the Rebus novels, recognising the places where the plot unfolds.

Previously I have mixed things up a bit when it comes to a setting. Thinking about it now, I might set some future stories in recognisable locations.


Sometimes I do use generic locations in modern America. Maybe I'm lucky in that I have New York and the rest of the metro area to work with, which have meany potential locations. Sometimes I go back to the past, often the 1970s and '80s. I do have first-hand memories of those. (Yeah, I'm getting a bit old.) I think the oldest period I've attempted is the 1910s. Going back earlier than that, say the Civil War era, would require some research which I haven't attempted yet.
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Most readers on here are reading for the sexual kick. If we writers can give them that, make their fantasy real, to the best of our ability, all well and good. But I imagine most casual readers could not give a fuck about literary ability. They just want their particular itch scratching.




It varies a lot among the readers. After being on three different sites in more than three years, I'd say - based on the feedback I've gotten, which isn't a huge amount - that many readers appreciate a good story beyond the sex. For example, some of them like a story with a setting they recognize. I had one guy say that he fondly remembers going to Garret Mountain in New Jersey, where I had placed the concluding scene for a story. I've had others mention the Paradise Theater in The Bronx which I have used several times as a setting (it's been a church now for many years).

It sounds like small things, but people notice what an author has done. Some of the scenes in the theater were about sex, but it wasn't just any theater. It was a specific one that some people have memories of being in themselves.
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Kimmi, you are so very nice and at the same time so very naughty. My first story (for which you now have no excuse for not reading) was a total of over 15,000 words, split into two parts. That one was easy to write as it was true, about me and how I found Lush. Having said that, it was rejected several times for being of pretty low quality with regards to spelling, formatting and almost complete lack of correct punctuation. Thankfully tams_back_yay took pity on me and went the extra mile to correct it. After that, people were asking me for more, something I never had so started to make stuff up. Since then, the ever lovely twisted_skald (Mischelle) has very kindly taken me under her wing and invited me to join her novice writers club. Since I’ve been on lush I have received nothing but kindness. I count myself so very lucky to have been accepted by you and many others. I’ve even been gifted bronze, silver and gold membership. I owe it to those lovely people to do my best and continue writing. So basically, thank you and all of the wonderful people of Lush for giving me this opportunity. PS, I was only joking about reading my first story, it does ramble on a bit but if you ever have a problem sleeping it may be worth a try. Oh yes, I almost forgot to say, I got myself a bit squiffy today and dropped the “F” word into one of my stories. Oh dear, kindest regards, Verity


You might want to try the free version of Gramnarly. I once had a story rejected because I had made some sloppy mistakes, and the moderator practically ordered me to get it.

It has to be used with some caution, because it doesn't replace a human editor. It requires some judgment calls, because sometimes it recommends things that don't make any sense. (I remember wanting to use brown stone, the material, and Grammarly wanted it as brownstone, the type of building.) If you can get a human proofreader, that would be ideal.
Welcome to Lush! I've noticed that editing in Chrome (when the story is in drafts mode on the site) is easier here than on Firefox. Posting seems about the same. I have Edge but I rarely use it.

Have you ever published anywhere, online or in print?
It looks like there are four new entries in the last twenty-four hours or so. The last-minute pace seems to be picking up speed.
Quote by KimmiBeGood

Oooo, I heard a whip cracking.

Me, me, me, please! Kimmi needs to be whipped into action too


Do you really have something for this, or are you just pulling our legs - or our whips?
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Noooo! I'm still finishing mine, and I expect there will be a few more last-minute entries. I think the usual number is around 50.

This one is quite a challenge, I think. How to get the foolishness into the story, without spoiling the eroticism or the story structure. But the challenge is one of the reasons for entering, plus the fact that competition entries tend to get more reads.


You're cutting it pretty close here. It sounds like you have more to do than just the final polish. But some people work better under pressure.
Quote by CumGirl
45 stories in this competition now and I have finally finished reading them all.

And if that doesn't deserve a badge, I don't know what does.

Any chance of just closing the competition early to stop any more entries? I don't think my head can take any more.

Please xxx

Besides, I've got 6 stories I'm waiting to publish, none if which I'm allowed to do until this thing is done.


Forty-five - what is the usual number for these competitions? Yeah, there are a lot of last-minute entries, but it does say May 6, so give them the time. Nobody said you have to read them all - I don't even try! And you can still publish your other stories unless you think this is too big of a distraction - too many readers for the competition only?
I hope you guys haven't caused any crashes doing this.



Who could imagine that a lack of panties could result in such a mess? (I guess FedEx was late with some of its deliveries that day.)
Quote by Jen


No sorry. Links to your own personal site are fine, but not to another story site. Any series published here should be complete works.

If it truly is a standalone then it's fine to publish here, with no links.

Thanks.


Okay, thanks, no problem. Anyway, it might have worked but it also may have confused some readers as well.
This is a little hard to explain, and I'm not even sure it's a good idea. I was thinking of publishing a chapter from another site as a stand-alone story on Lush. It hasn't been published on the other site yet. I was wondering if I could direct readers to the other seven chapters that have already been posted.
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I'm Ethel, I just joined here and I am lost.

I got kicked off of Literotica for "violating" a "rule" that I don't think I did violate.

The first thing I did here was ask for a definition of "ZZZ" (something that was banned there as well as here).

The rules say I cannot post "true" stories about ___. I also cannot post anything on the subject of "ZZZ" on the forum, or in the chat room. But the definition of "ZZZ" is unclear. Here the "rules" say that "ZZZ" is "Y" between "A" "B" people. (The problem being A is a variable with no set value. (Like how much cayenne pepper is too much?)

We are all people, so at one logical extreme it bans all communication. Logically, that cannot be a valid interpretation. At the other extreme it does not include what I want to say. Which is fine, unless after I've unpacked my metaphorical bags I am told to leave.

The "rules" go on to say that "ZZZ" is illegal. That is truly a can of worms. It isn't illegal in New York State (where I live) or in the adjoining states of Pennsylvania, New Jersey, Connecticut, Massachusetts, Vermont or any of Canada. But it is illegal, or banned without criminal penalty in 17 US States. There is no federal law against it.

Then it goes on to say it's banned at Lush if a majority of site members find it "highly objectionable." Has there been a referendum? What is "highly objectionable"? The answer is becoming more confusing than the question.

I want to be respectful of the rules here. I don't want to offend or be writing where I am not welcome. What I am "not talking" about is legal and not that unusual in New York, but often gets conflated with something that is illegal and pretty rare. (Like using a law against "drugs" to ban aspirin, which technically IS a drug.)

I don't want to be in a place where I am not welcome. I don't want to break any of the rules here. I would truly welcome a PM so I could "fill in the blanks" and ask the question straight out.

--Ethel


Rather than worrying about the rules of each site (and I'm both Literotica and Lush, and I'm very fond of both of them), just go to a site that will allow whatever it is you want to do. It will save you a lot of agita. Do what you want to do; don't get hung up on the rules of a particular site. Those can not be changed.