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LakeShoreLimited
1 week ago
Straight Male, 70
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Quote by Koba17
I just submitted my first contest entry! Yay! I hope it makes it by the moderators. It should. It's a sacrilegious comedy with a very sweet ending. It's called 'Broken Vows Broken Lovers'. Look for it in your grocer's freezer section in a few days.


They approve comp entries pretty fast here.

I really am writing the Greyhound bus story. It's not going in the comp, obviously - so I'm giving it the number of words I think necessary - but it is in the spirit of the comp. I have some other things to post first, so look for it in about a month.
Quote by KimmiBeGood
QUESTION:

For comps ... is it okay to develop a published microfiction into a full story and submit in competitions or is that considered a no-no like submitting a story based on a published series?

I've been meaning to ask...



I'll have to let one of the moderators answer that. I assume you mean for the next competition.

There are a lot of train stories in this one, which is not surprising. The latest one is in New Zealand, Waiouru being a military base in that country. I suppose one could be set in the back seat of a long-distance bus. Maybe I should write one just for the hell of it. It could be based on a Greyhound trip I took years ago.
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This might seem petty, but it's annoying to constantly debate old white men who can't seem to figure out how to make an avatar.

I honestly mix them up all the time.

I would prefer the forums not turn into the comments section of a youtube page.

In fact, I think that all members should have an avatar. It will dissuade lazy idiots from making profiles to peddle nonsense.


Well, I'm an old white man and I have an avatar! I scrolled through the photos on my phone until I found one I liked. I'm not sure it has any deeper meaning beyond looking good. Well, maybe it does because I write about New York so much.

By the way, get off my lawn!
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I'm a bad speller, and I'm a bad typer, and I'm not very detail-oriented. The Word spell checker helps some, but it's a real blind spot for me. For me reading it over and over and over is the best solution, and even that doesn't always work.


Grammarly helps as an extra layer between Word and your own proofing. I'm not a very good speller or typist either. I hate to think of what I did using an electric typewriter when I was in college (1973-77). Back then the second draft usually had to be final one. I still handed in papers with corrections added with a pen.
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I'm scared. smile

It's so weird, it's "Iean" instead of "lean." I can't even figure out how it did that.


Typos creep in. I've read old stories of mine, and I have "finders" instead of fingers in one. Lush approves corrections pretty quickly. On another site, it takes a week to ten days; edits go to the back of the list. If it's a couple of years old, and it's like one word, I don't bother over there.

Grammarly helps catch misspellings. The Word spell checker, in the stage before that, helps too. But if the word is spelled correctly but it's the wrong word, then it may be missed by both programs. Careful proofreading is important, so don't rush it, but I've found there is a limit to how many times I can reread the same material. It reminds me of what Brian De Palma said about editing his own movies. He had to look at the same scenes over and over until he couldn't stand seeing them again, and he would lose track of what he had originally intended. So give yourself a couple of days before going back to proofread a story again.
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Hey, a mod question: I just posted my story, but there's a typo, and in the last line! Can I just go in and change it? I know that cool normally, but don't know about comps.


I think if you just do it was a normal edit, and then tell the mod what it is - like one word or something - they will approve it quite quickly. They already give priority to comp entries it seems.
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I have one of those now cooling its heels in my "Unfinished Drafts" folder. Might still go back to it someday. Would have been harder to keep it to 1000 than the one I used.


I didn't get involved with comps until six months ago. Isn't 1,000 words on the low side? Or have there been others before like that?
Forgot to quote you. "That is my usual approach, almost word for word. And it worked for the 4th attempt, which made it into the comp. The other 3 ideas were like LakeShoreLimited said: too much plot for the tiny word count, so I'm saving those and going to turn them into slightly longer works to give them breathing room."

I was fortunate in that I never went over 1,000. There were some bits of dialogue that I considered but I never wrote them. One would have been the guy boasting about his knowledge of trains, but I could see that wasn't going to fit. I managed to summarize it in the last paragraph, and that seemed good enough.

"Proud and Kinky" allowed 2,500, which gives a lot more more leeway. One thousand words is pretty tough.
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Smart strategy, Lakeshore. My issue with this one is that it has WAY more plot than I usually write. So I started the story, and when I saw it was going long I jumped forward to the ending, because I KNEW that had to be there. Then I went in and back-filled in all the sex (not a euphemism). I’m still cutting, but it’s gonna be tight (also not a euphemism). Have another 100 to go.

Thanks for responding.


It's possible that if you have that much plot, then maybe you should write it as you wish and not put it in the competition. It's up to you. You still have nearly a month to think of something else for the comp. It's nice to be in a competition - lots of attention for one thing - but maybe this story deserves 1,500 words or whatever. I was lucky in that I immediately thought of something and wrote it in a day with maybe 975 words.
At first glance, it seems to happen more with television rather than movies. Bryan Cranston will always be associated with Walter White, and Jon Hamm with Don Draper. I suppose Anthony Perkins was typecast after Psycho , although he agreed to two sequels. Henry Fonda played against type by being a villain in Once Upon a Time in the West, and it was great to see his dark side.
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Okay. First draft: 1200 words. Gonna be a tough edit.


Sometimes it's easier to work from the bottom up rather than cutting from the top down. That may be a little hard to explain. Say you have the general idea of what you're going to do. Then, as you approach say 700 or 800, you know you've got to wrap up soon. You may have to leave out certain events or dialogue that you had originally considered. It may be better to have never written them in the first place rather than going back later and trying to decide what to edit out
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Both of which had shorter lengths (e.g. micro was limited to 100 words) so more likely to generate lots of entries. That said, this caps out at only 1000 words and has 36 entries in 9 days with the deadline still 4 weeks out. I could easily see it hitting the 80 mark. 120 might be attainable only in another micro comp though. Nonetheless, it gives us something to shoot for.1XXizwQj4Ylx7u66


And Lush doesn't even have a banner on the opening page yet, like they usually do. I know Nicola said it sometimes takes a while to create and decide on one of those. It looks like they are doing fine anyway.
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I came to Lush to hone my writing skills (the chat, though enjoyable, is incidental). Thanks to the advice of several wonderful Moderators, I've 'tightened' my style considerably and especially enjoy the rigid 999-word discipline of Flash Erotica. Am currently 'polishing' my entry for the Quickie competition.


Yes, I didn't realize until I entered the Quickie competition (it hasn't been posted yet) that it was possible to bring in a story at under 1,000 words. Yet I did it in 977, I think, yet I was pleased with the results. (I just hope other people are pleased with it too!)
I came here after being on another site for a while. I'm still on that site, but I felt like I had to branch out and test a new audience for a while. Later I joined a third site. That seems like enough for the moment.

I still read, but writing seems more engaging than most recent TV shows and movies. As an additional project, I'm writing a sort of disjointed autobiography about myself and my family. I send installments to my daughter, who will be thirty in about three weeks. She said she wanted to read them, but I haven't gotten any feedback yet. I'm still going to send them anyway.
Writing is a major - call it tool - for me in dealing with depression. I discovered that three times in my life, once when on a college newspaper over forty-five years ago, the second time about fifteen years ago when I was experimenting with some screenplays, and the third time about four years ago when I was recovering from surgery. The last time I found various sites to post material on, which was a major motivation. I had a steady, consistent audience.When I was on that paper years ago, it only came out about ten times a year and there was a limited amount of space. With the Internet, the space is virtually unlimited and I have a backlog of material to post.

I had one setback in late 2019 and early 2020 when I had grief over the passing of a close relative. I almost stopped writing for a while. Then a therapist said to me, "Just give it fifteen minutes a day and see what happens." On the first day I did two hours, and then I was quickly back up to speed.
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I think you may be trying to do it the wrong way. Don't use the toolbar thing that asks for a URL. Just use the Cover Image thing that shows you all the images in your gallery and click on the one you want.
Then you can choose whether or not you want the title and your name written in over the image. You do not have to upload the image again.

Then click the Continue button (come on, it's a big blue button at the bottom of the page!) and you get a preview of your story with the image so you can check if it all looks okay, and click save story or edit draft.


Okay, that continue button. But it's not blue, it's got black letters on a white/gray background. I haven't actually done anything yet except write the story.

Thanks, I think with all of the info below I should be able to do this; probably by tomorrow.
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I DID say white on rice, then became mortified after Urban Dictionary told me is was a racist sexual reference. I like to think I’m pretty unshockable, but Urban Dictionary proves me wrong on a pretty regular basis.


According to the Urban Dictionary, there are two meanings, the first being the one I meant and the second being racist. But I somethings think that that many of the entries on there, being posted by the users, are just made up and thus fictional. You'll sometimes see dueling entries, where one poster praises a certain town or even a high school, and the other criticizes it.
Thanks. Well, I don't have the text in the submissions window yet. I do have the image in the image gallery. I didn't resize it to refit my profile because it isn't going there. Yeah, I do see the images available. By the way, what does H&V space mean?

Okay, so when I do hit the Submit Story button, I put the image in first? (The whole thing will be in drafts for a while.) Offhand, I don't see "continue." Do you mean I have to upload the image again when I have the submission window open and I'm filling in the various fields?

By the way, the image I used for my avatar a long time ago is no longer in the gallery. I assume that when it is used once, it is no longer there for any future use.
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I am on this like Ahab on Moby Dick.


At least he didn't say, "like white on rice." That would have been rather hackneyed. His was perhaps original, but the whale definitely won that confrontation.
I've read the "guidelines to posting an image" thread elsewhere, but the technical details are lacking.

The drafts mode has a toolbar with an image function. It asks for the URL. Does that mean I can use an image from my own computer files?

How do I size it? I would think that the image defaults to the width of the story column. And what do HSpace and VSpace mean? I assume that refers to horizontal and vertical space.

Also, I don't want to add any text.

Thank you!
I don't know what is it is about these competitions, but they always give me an inspiration.
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Bikini Booze Delivery at your service!


I interpreted it as he meant photographs. Maybe I just got tripped up by his phrasing.
Let's go with the pros:

William Blake: "He who desires, but acts not, breeds pestilence."

Oscar Wilde: "Always forgive your enemies - nothing annoys them so much."

Dorothy Parker: “If you wear a short enough skirt, the party will come to you.”
Just happened to read an article on crushes from The Guardian via Pocket on this topic. Psychologist Dorothy Tennov compares crushes to "the intensity an addict feels in the all-consuming pull for drugs: limerent people find themselves doing bizarre things in order to pursue their crush."

My experience with the three true crushes in my life has been that when they are over, I always thought "what the hell was that all about?" The three women I was thinking about were all completely unsuited for me.
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I don't know but I want some would do wonders for my creativity.


I've never smoked anything that helped my creativity, but I've had some that would have hindered it. "Ah, this is the keyboard, right?" Anyway, the entries have been been pouring in for the last couple of days.
Since you asked, I often prefer that both participants have some garments on. It gives the illusion that they were in too much of a hurry to completely disrobe.

For women, it's interesting if they still have footgear on: high heels, boots, sandals, knee socks all work fine. Garters, staps, and nylon stockings are another interesting variation. Isn't there some song where the guy wants the lady to keep her roller-blades on? I also love those old-fashioned bloomers that either open at the bottom or have a drop-seat panel. They still sell those for anyone interested.


Well. my life used to be a train wreck, but it's been getting better recently. Mosholu Parkway, The Bronx, October 23, 1952. One fatality, a train operator. My parents had been married the month before. When I was first married, 1978 - 1981, we lived around the corner and I used this station all of the time.