This is only my second story. I'm very much a baby when it comes to writing so I'd appreciate any feedback or suggestions on how to improve. Thanks in advance.

https://www.lushstories.com/stories/bdsm/denied

Hey,

So I have published my first story. I would love it if you took the time to read it and leave me a little feedback. Very much in my infancy so please be kind.

Thank you ♥️

The anticipation of waiting #lush https://www.lushstories.com/stories/bdsm/waiting-22