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Luckymann
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 154
United States
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Rookie Scribe
Pixie, we are not all clueless. However, men have been trying to figure out women for eons. We are not mind readers, you know. Women cry for a host of reasons, including something dumb they saw on TV. If you tell us what's bothering you, we may be able to do something about it. Until you start talking, a good hug is all we can give you ladies.
Rookie Scribe
I prefer using the first person prospective, but I will sometimes use the third person or overview style. I avoid mixing prospectivies in any one story. I think that shows a lack of knowledge of the rules of English grammar. Shock of shocks, there really are rules.
Though I don't claim to be an authority on English composition, I try my best. My strongest advise is to proof-read your work before submitting it. If it flows smoothly as your read, it will probably be acceptable to most of your readers. Even writings for the internet should at least stick to the basics of good grammar to avoid as much confusion as possible.
Though I don't claim to be an authority on English composition, I try my best. My strongest advise is to proof-read your work before submitting it. If it flows smoothly as your read, it will probably be acceptable to most of your readers. Even writings for the internet should at least stick to the basics of good grammar to avoid as much confusion as possible.
Rookie Scribe
Catnip, you may also try love tunnel or hot hole. I usually try to use a term that is not too repetative and gives the impression I want. I don't always succeed. To me, cunt gives a cruder or rougher impression that pussy. For example: Joe rammed his cock deep into her cunt. Or, Joe slid his cock gently into her tender pussy or love tunnel. Just run your sentence over in your head and go with what feels good to you. Remember, you must write to please yourself. There will always be readers who will praise your work or complain about it. Please yourself first. And finally, please proof read and use spell check. Good luck!