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Mazza
4 weeks ago
Straight Female, 55
0 miles · Lanark
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Mazztastic
I've just had a beer
I'd really like another
But I have no more
**
I thought about beer
And my need for beer was great
The shop would soon close.
**
I jumped in the car
Keeping an eye on the time
Only eight mins left
**
I picked up some cans
And zoomed up to the counter
Handed her my card
**
So now I have beer
And I'm sipping from my can
Aaaah, that's better. Cheers!
I'd really like another
But I have no more
**
I thought about beer
And my need for beer was great
The shop would soon close.
**
I jumped in the car
Keeping an eye on the time
Only eight mins left
**
I picked up some cans
And zoomed up to the counter
Handed her my card
**
So now I have beer
And I'm sipping from my can
Aaaah, that's better. Cheers!
Mazztastic
Quote by CurlyGirly
Nikki, can you please explain the circled area to me? Not the cooter. I pretty much got that figured out and know what it's used for. What the heck is that on the rug?
I can think of one or two things and they're both making me sick.
I hope that's just a very unfortunate shadow... PLEASE just let it be a shadow....
You have to take care in the sun...
Or it can damage your skin...
I don't always find a suntan nice at all...
I live in Scotland... What is this "sun" of which you speak??
Mazztastic
Quote by Wildcat
As I've said before, Lush Forums can be addictive, better than any daytime soap opera.
All this talk of cybering has gotten me so hot and bothered. The hormones are emanating from my computer screen, driving me crazy.
Mr Hugecock69, please contact me for a hot steamy session of smutty sex-talk. You can contact me at.... 6mwoPyhqQhmLb1dz
Dammit Wildcat!!! You promised that I would be your first... You promised...
Mazztastic
Quote by clum
This is one, I suppose?
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-stories/love-machine.aspx
Yes! That was one - I really really enjoyed that one...
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/supernatural/the-prince-of-valentinium.aspx
This one too...
(actually, I'd recommend most of the comp stories. I've actually had the chance to read almost all of them so far, which makes a nice change, as I don't usually have that much time... I've made a special effort to read them though)
Mazztastic
Clum beat me to it!! I can't imagine that sort of thing being posted here...
We do have a very fine selection of scifi stories though... I'd recommend checking out the ones posted in the valentines competition... There are two absolute crackers there! (I'll come back and add links when I'm not browsing on my phone)
We do have a very fine selection of scifi stories though... I'd recommend checking out the ones posted in the valentines competition... There are two absolute crackers there! (I'll come back and add links when I'm not browsing on my phone)
Mazztastic
Quote by Hugecock69
I don't consider professional writers of erotica writers either. Call it a site to write but it's writing porn so it's a sex site. I get the site needs money to run, but many gold members seem to think they are better or above other members of the site, they still belong to a sex site, that doesn't make you an amazing person.
You know, I indulged you and commented, but it seems to me that you're just trying to cause bad feeling and arguments. I'm not interested in anything else that you have to say.
Mazztastic
Quote by Hugecock69
Ok not sure where people got the idea that I have had multiple user names, I said I have been a member multiple times, I have always used this user name. If I'm a "sub-human" because I like to cyber what are all these amazing writers who come to this site because they need to express their desires they can't have with the real people in their lives? Same idea. I never claimed to be a writer, I'm not, but you're not God's gift to humanity bringing us deep insights into the human mind and condition while writing sex stories online either. You say you'd like to see me write a story? fair enough, I'd like to see you write a real story, a real novel that captures the reader not because there is going to be sex but because they've become attached to characters. I'm not saying there isn't anyone to cyber with, but there is less, I've seen other men complain about it. It used to be you go into a chatroom and there were equal men and women. Now you go into a chatroom there are 22 men, and 3 women. One of the women won't respond to anyone, one is only interested in women, and the third is only there to write her eloquent stories as the voice of a generation, and don't you dare say hi to her because you'll surly get I'M ONLY HERE TO WRITE, I DON'T WANT YOUR COCK!!!!!! Ok don't flatter yourself I was just gonna say I like your stories. I didn't do this for attention. I didn't even do it because I miss cybering. I did it because I miss the old Lush, I feel that half of the people are over-aggressive about their amazing writing and you can't even talk to them as friends anymore.
The point of Lush (as far as I know) is to write and or read sexy/erotic stories. If they didn't have the sex, then Lush would not be the place to post them. I know for a fact that many of the contributors on Lush DO write that sort of stuff you're talking about elsewhere, why we have a large number of well respected, published authors here and how cool is it that the rest of us get to submit our scribbles alongside them?
If you're looking for that sort of thing, perhaps you should surf on over to Stories Space and see some of the work submitted there?
Personally, had I not found Lush, I probably wouldn't write at all. I have no aspirations of becoming a "proper" writer but I do get lovely feedback, which is very encouraging. Do you know, it's a wonderful outlet and a way of expressing myself which I can't do in everyday life.
Plenty "proper" writers have written wonderful erotic works; Robert Burns, William Shakespeare, Anne Rice (under a pseudonym) to name just a few. And, if something I read here moves me, lifts my mood, makes my day, sticks in my memory, then to me, that IS proper writing.
As CocoKisses said, all of the other aspects of Lush are simply perks and quite honestly, I think to come onto the site, slagging it and its members off, is both bad form and downright rude.
I have met lots of wonderful people here and Lush is what you make of it and if you didn't come here to read or write then it's very unfair of you to slag off those of us who do.
Mazztastic
I don't like to leave negative feedback, many writers (like me) are putting pen to paper (well, finger to keyboard) for the first time and I think harsh criticism could easily deter someone from writing any more...
If I don't like a story, then I will either not comment, or more likely find something positive to say - there's always something nice that you can say, isn't there?
If I felt moved to, I would send a private message to the writer, rather than spoil their comment section with negative feedback.
If you're looking for more constructive feedback, maybe you could PM a couple of your regular readers and ask if they would be willing to go into more depth than they have on the stories themselves, or OMKN's thread would be a good way to get more gritty feedback...
Good luck with it!
If I don't like a story, then I will either not comment, or more likely find something positive to say - there's always something nice that you can say, isn't there?
If I felt moved to, I would send a private message to the writer, rather than spoil their comment section with negative feedback.
If you're looking for more constructive feedback, maybe you could PM a couple of your regular readers and ask if they would be willing to go into more depth than they have on the stories themselves, or OMKN's thread would be a good way to get more gritty feedback...
Good luck with it!
Mazztastic
Quote by Magical_felix
A few things come to mind after reading this.
1. I know you just need attention so you posted this to get a rise out of people. I understand this but I'm still going to wast some time.
2. Actually, I feel that cybering and the profiles play a bigger role on the site than ever.
3. You say there are not as many women interested in cybering with you right? Well guess what? They probably want to cyber with people that write the stories, dumb dumb.
4. It's always someone that has an inability to do something that is the biggest critic of said activity... Like a monday morning quarterback... Since you know the difference between real writing and fake writing, why don't you write something to show us what writing is all about. It will probably be a masterpiece and guess what? Maybe someone will want to cyber with you.
5. You do realize that some of the writers here write other places as well, right? Some may even make a living writing? Do you think some of the better writers on here just wake up with this incredible ability to keep someone entertained for 40 minutes with shit that comes out of their head? Lets see you try that trick.
6. No offense to the cyber junkies... But I would imagine that the need to cyber is directly correlated to the Lack of real sex in your life. Obviously you are frustrated and in need of a sexual release and now you can't even cyber. Sounds like your tongue is made of lead, not silver. Maybe try one of the lesser "writing" sites populated by more desperate sub-humans like yourself. You will probably have better luck.
I mean how many of you have seen an attractive, charismatic, put-together person walking around going. "Man, what I really need right now is to cyber somebody who may or may not even be the same gender they claim to be on the internet! I used to cyber all the time on this one website! Now I can't even get that." The thought of someone saying that makes me cringe when I think about what their existence must be like.
Absolutely correct! Also what DW wrote is just right...
