So sorry.
I really don't photograph well.
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Michael
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male
0 miles · Fort Lauderdale
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It is the best advertisement I have seen since Apple unveiled the Mac in 1984.
Sophisticated beginning, heightening the interest level.
Seeing this mysterious author writing a story, I wonder what she is expressing and creates the desire to explore her fantasies.
Then the animation starts up and their humorous escapades insure I will not forget it.
Five Stars
Sophisticated beginning, heightening the interest level.
Seeing this mysterious author writing a story, I wonder what she is expressing and creates the desire to explore her fantasies.
Then the animation starts up and their humorous escapades insure I will not forget it.
Five Stars
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I had recently read of a couple having an enjoyable night out in a club with the husband giving her an occasional "tickle". She came out of the bathroom, obviously in need of help. As her husband came to her aid, she was slowly sinking to the floor saying "Turn it off, turn the damn thing OFF!".
Looking at his remote, the light was off. Suddenly another lady realized what was happening and told her hubby to check his remote. It had inadvertently been turned on. They had been playing earlier and after she removed it, he had accidentally hit the "on" button.
But it did work out as an interesting way to meet people with something in common.
Looking at his remote, the light was off. Suddenly another lady realized what was happening and told her hubby to check his remote. It had inadvertently been turned on. They had been playing earlier and after she removed it, he had accidentally hit the "on" button.
But it did work out as an interesting way to meet people with something in common.
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The answers given are all right to the point, but you do need to question which readers you are aiming for.
"Most Popular" is always 95 percent , but they don't generate the highest votes.
Not every story is boy meets girl, then hard sex. Pick a unique subject matter, I have several now that I am doing research on for future stories.
Some of the best stories I have read here had mild fantasy, magic or related things going on. I prefer reading first person narrative, but it is difficult to fully express a story that way.
My last story has many hits, but only 9 votes and 4 comments. The votes are high, and the comments are all good so I think I did attract the readers I wanted.
What would I change? I wouldn't submit a story two days before a site outage. I would improve the title.
Maybe add an animal in the first lines (I know, no ) but the truth is, I don't think a "hook" will work if it isn't an integral part of the story.
"Most Popular" is always 95 percent , but they don't generate the highest votes.
Not every story is boy meets girl, then hard sex. Pick a unique subject matter, I have several now that I am doing research on for future stories.
Some of the best stories I have read here had mild fantasy, magic or related things going on. I prefer reading first person narrative, but it is difficult to fully express a story that way.
My last story has many hits, but only 9 votes and 4 comments. The votes are high, and the comments are all good so I think I did attract the readers I wanted.
What would I change? I wouldn't submit a story two days before a site outage. I would improve the title.
Maybe add an animal in the first lines (I know, no ) but the truth is, I don't think a "hook" will work if it isn't an integral part of the story.
Author
The opinions stated here are from individuals, correction.. Writers that I respect and enjoy reading. Some of you are the most prolific writers here.
I recently went to the "Most Viewed" list, which I glean is based upon reads (meaning clicks). The top 14 of the top 15 stories read like case profiles for "Most Wanted". I didn't come here to read that type of story, nor do I care to demean myself to that level.
I love the concept of a weighted voting system, but it does sound complex.
Rather than having a comment not required, I would prefer to see comments required for all votes.
I post stories here to see if I have potential as a writer and hone my writing style, thus votes without comments are empty. I crave comments, more than that, I want constructive criticism. I would love to see my name on the list as a high rated author, but applause without reason is somewhat empty.
I recently went to the "Most Viewed" list, which I glean is based upon reads (meaning clicks). The top 14 of the top 15 stories read like case profiles for "Most Wanted". I didn't come here to read that type of story, nor do I care to demean myself to that level.
I love the concept of a weighted voting system, but it does sound complex.
Rather than having a comment not required, I would prefer to see comments required for all votes.
I post stories here to see if I have potential as a writer and hone my writing style, thus votes without comments are empty. I crave comments, more than that, I want constructive criticism. I would love to see my name on the list as a high rated author, but applause without reason is somewhat empty.