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NomDePlume
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 48

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I'm pretty aural and a beautiful voice can drive me wild.

My favourites:
Irish
Northern Irish
Scouse (Liverpool)
Southern US (think Ainsley from the West Wing)
Icelandic
French
An ex partner and and I filmed ourselves, but not for a wider audience
I adore it, with the right person. I can't just pick up with a stranger. I need to get to know what makes a person tick, to get understand them a little bit.

Once at that point, there's nothing sexier than connecting, deeply, with someone through words alone. To explore the deepest recesses of another person's imagination, to push and pull one another through a shared fantasy, to create something unique and vital, for just a moment. It's the best.
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I got balls deep in Winston Churchill this past weekend.
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You've had quite a weekend!

[Quote=DamonX]The Teaching Company (Now called The Great Courses) are a superb learning tool, and also a pretty good way to pass the time if you have a long commute to work, or want something to listen to while doing boring boring cardio at the gym.

https://www.thegreatcourses.com


Seconded. Can be pretty dry and dusty depending on the lecturer, but generally excellent. I find it useful to have Google images open as I listen, so I can bring up relevant maps, portraits, locations or whatever, depending on what's being discussed.

Last film I saw was The Last Entertainer, a musical about PT Barnum. It's far from a great movie, BUT it's a hell of a lot of fun to watch: stylish, well paced and brilliantly choreographed.
I spent my late teens and most of my twenties utterly uncomfortable in my own skin. So far, 28 and onwards into my early thirties has been great. More secure, more comfortable and (a little bit) more confident.
Any longer than 1-2 days is an age for me.

I tend to get stressed, hyperactive and pretty grumpy. The orgasm is so much better though, it's almost worth the wait. Almost
Probably in the minority in that I quite like spitting. Not sure why, it just seems sexy as hell somehow
Introduce the title of your story: Tori and Mr Renshaw (Part 1: Tori)
Genre/Category: Masturbation
Provide the link: [url=]https://www.lushstories.com/stories/masturbation/tori-and-mr-renshaw-part-1-tori.aspx[/url]

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?

This is the first truly new piece I have written in over a year, but the origins go back maybe a decade. I once started to write a story with shifting chronology and twin perspectives, about a teacher and former student. I never got close to finishing it, but I've since toyed with the idea of writing two, maybe three pieces focused on the same characters - his and hers masturbation stories, then probably a coming together at the end.

2. How did you come up with these characters?

I'm proud of these characters, both of which are quite carefully drawn for such a short piece. Tori, as the first-year son narrator, is the most developed. I wanted to reflect a kind of Electra complex around her dad and Mr Renshaw, which I probably over play, but also her first sexual explorations- not really liking what she thinks is her g spot, her trying out of different positions.

Mr Renshaw is seen entirely through Tori's eyes, but I wanted to highlight exactly why she might have been attracted to him, through his shyness and kindness and reliability.

The second piece will be written from Mr Renshaw's perspective. The idea is that, when read as a pair, both characters will end up quite three-dimensional and believable.

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?

The motivations and psychology of the main character are given much more attention, especially when compared to my last few pieces. That was deliberate. I wanted to understand the attractions and neuroses of an eighteen year old girl.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?

As a man, I needed a lot of research into female masturbation. I think the detail and variety of what I write is pretty convincing. I'm very pleased with that.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?

An annoying typo or two aside ( a pitfall of writing on a phone) I think it's the best thing I've ever written, certainly for a few years anyway. I'm very proud of it.
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A few have covered Abba and added their own twist but this is just so damn dark and haunting it makes the cover superbly original imo.



You have made my day.
Absolutely. I enjoy reading, first and foremost, and the half dozen or so best erotic stories I've read are far more powerful and enduring than the best porn I've seen. I also find that reading helps my writing, especially when writing about an unfamiliar experience or from a female perspective, but also by keeping me fresh and helping to avoid repeating myself (which is an unfortunate tendancy I have).
Tom Waits - Rain Dogs. Arguably the best in a back catalogue of perhaps five or more 5* albums.
No. And yes.

I hate it because I'm insanely jealous, but in that envy is a sublime sort of arousal. It's kind of like a sexual version of running a tongue ulcer along your teeth.
I am a pretty decent Scrabble player
I really like the seaside
I love the smell of rain on hot, dry tarmac
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Anyone can write the sex we have during the week, but honestly, if you are creating a fantasy, don't you feel it should be worth fantasizing about?


Others have rightly picked up on this thoughtful idea, but I'd flip it around. Anyone can make fucking an 18 year old on a trapeze (I'm being glib) interesting and exotic, but the banal beauty of the everyday is a kind of holy grail of any kind of art. For me anyway.

This isn't an attempt to stir up conflict, and I'm not for one minute suggesting you'll find it in anything I write, I'm just offering an alternative perspective. I think Hopper once said that he hated painting flowers as their beauty was 'self-sufficient'; the challenge is finding beauty and excitement beyond the obvious.

I look for ways to make my characters more real - a pot belly here, a scar there, hang ups and neuroses lurking all over the place; I don't always dwell on them (my stories are short by Lush standards), and my writing more often focuses on the attractive parts of my characters and the pleasurable aspects of their sex, but the cracks are there. Without them, I'm just making cartoons.

Speaking more broadly about the question, I spend far too long, sometimes months, crafting a 2500 word story. I have no delusions of making great art, but I do take it seriously and I won't submit something I am not happy with. I have submitted six stories on this site and, although I have my own preferences, in different ways I'll stand by each of them, imperfections and all. I'd hate to put out something that I later found embarrassing (not disliked, that's slightly different), so I kind of have to take it seriously.
Introduce the title of your story: Susannah

G
enre/Category: Straight Sex

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story? This was a very old story, perhaps 8 years old, that I never quite got right. It was inspired by a fantasy I had about a friend of the girl I'll was dating at the time. She was the original Susannah.

2. How did you come up with these characters? The only interesting character is Susannah, or at least she was the one I was interested in exploring. She was originally based on a friend of my girlfriend at the time. The other week, I saw a photograph of an astonishingly beautiful, red-haired woman and somewhere in the back of my mind I thought of my poor, orphan story, Susannah. I went back and finished the story, rewriting Susannah's appearance and part of her character to fit this woman. Http://www.radiotimes.com/uploads/images/Original/117929.jpg

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories? It really doesn't. It's a shortish, very detailed and florid vignette. want to try new things with my writing now. My next piece is another old draft (about 10 years old, actually) edited to 65% of its original length to work as a flash piece. I am really pleased with that and excited to see how it's received. Longer term, I am going to get around to writing a three part story from multiple perspectives. As much as I am happy with Susannah and it's my second RR, my stories are very similar and I do want to branch out both in terms of subject matter (though to be fair, my sexual tastes are pretty narrow and I'd struggle to write in some categories), but especially written format and style.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece? Returning to it after all these years.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it? As you can probably tell, I think I can do better... smile
It rewrote a character in my latest story (awaiting verification) to make her look like this. (EDIT: this one)

Just 'wow'.


So many too mention, from Joni to Aretha, but I am going to say that this is one of the best albums ever made and just leave it at that.