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NomDePlume
Over 90 days ago
Straight Male, 48

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Don't really care for musicals, though I make an exception for West Side Story.
Something on. I once read somewhere that the art of the erotic is a balance of concealing and revealing. I buy that.
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Definitely. That nibbling her lip thing. She was unbelievably hot in the West Wing.
Barack Obama recently shared his. It's only about 40 minutes, but the guy has impeccable taste.

Obama playlist

Recently, it has become my play list too, though I like to run with just my overheating brain for company sometimes.
Introduce the title of your story: The Fall of Eden
Genre/Category: Straight Sex
Provide the link: [url=]https://www.lushstories.com/stories/straight-sex/the-fall-of-eden.aspx[/url]

1. What first inspired you to write this particular story?


A few months ago, I found the idea of beginning the story with a frustrated young woman looking in the mirror in much the same way, before a night out, and ending it, in a kind of juxtaposition, with her seeing herself wasted and defiled after a rough, anonymous sexual encounter. I had my beginning and end, a pair of bookends, and ran from there, really. It's really a set piece, and there is a deliberate, kind of twisted symmetry between the first and last paragraphs which is meant to be artful in, I admit, a pretty juvenile kind of way.

2. How did you come up with these characters?

The guy is pretty generic, if I'm being honest. His only interesting feature is his skin colour and sudden change in mood and manner once in the cubicle with Eden. That's deliberate in a way. It's meant to be anonymous, loveless sex; it's what Eden wants, it's the point, it's the thrill of it for her.

Eden is based on someone I know. Her physical characteristics are hers, but her personality is complete fantasy.

3. How does it differ from some of your other stories?

The sex is much rougher and more aggressive than anything I've ever written before. I am quite pleased with the writing, but to my taste it's the least sexy full-length story I've ever written, here or anywhere else. I don't think I'd enjoy the sex, but that made it challenging.

4. What was the most challenging thing about writing this piece?

Apart from the sex not really being to my taste, I went into more detail than I have before about penetration from a female perspective. I found myself scouring a few forums for ideas about how that might feel and then putting it into my own words. That was fun.

5. Anything else you want to tell us about it?

The story nearly died. I started writing it 3 months ago and I never got beyond the first paragraph. I couldn't paint Eden the way I wanted to and it was left for months on end with only about 6 lines written. I came back to it a week ago, lived with it for about a week and it came out the other side as it is. I'm glad I didn't kill it.
Edward Hopper, Summertime, 1943. Hopper knew that the art of the erotic is concealing and revealing at the same time: giving enough for the imagination to feed off, but leaving something to it.

His ladies were always modelled on his wife, hence the very similar bodily and facial features across all his women.

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That's a beautiful picture.
In about 10 stories (3 under this name on here) I've never included female squirting and am not likely to as it's something I've never experienced and the idea doesn't particularly turn me on (doesn't repulse me, I'm just ambivalent I suppose). Never say never, but it's not something I'm desperate to write about.

In terms of its apparent over-representation generally (I hadn't noticed, to be honest), I imagine its prevalence in porn and male fantasies has something to do with it, but also the fact that it's a pretty easy, physically-obvious way to signify a female orgasm, especially for a male writer.
Emma Hamilton by George Romney. It teeters on the cusp of virginal and whorish, somehow. Her mouth, in particular, is spectacular.

My first proper girlfriend. I was 19, she was 18. In my university bedroom. We got better and stayed together for a few years. I remember her fondly.
Can't think of a specific scene, but Cruel Intentions was pretty hot for me growing up
Running, mostly 5k and 10k distances, but further from time to time