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PierceAmor
3 hours ago
Male, 39
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Hello,

The Type is my open marriage serialized novel here on Lush. It follows a married couple of thirteen years in modern New Jersey, beginning the day the husband realizes his wife has been cheating. He soon forces and receives her full confession, and together they agree to difficult, destabilizing terms going forward.

Garin is thoughtful, analytical, emotionally restrained; a rising corporate executive shaped by responsibility, ambition, and long hours. Exhausted, often distant, but a dutiful dad, he believes in loyalty, structure, and choosing bounds over chaos. Faced with betrayal, he decides not to explode or implode. Instead, he tries to understand, to negotiate, to reciprocate, and to stay standing inside a reality that no longer makes sense to him.

Lyrou is intelligent, intimate, disarming, compartmentalized and conflicted; a highly educated Frenchwoman who became a stay-at-home mother to support her man’s career, and slowly vanished inside the role. Once underappreciated, under-stimulated, and quietly lonely, she had spent years suppressing parts of herself before crossing a line she couldn't uncross, and refused to pretend to herself it didn't change her. She is neither villain nor victim, but something far more dangerous: honest for the first time.

And there are their paramours; the hypermasculine master of his domain Tom, the what-could-have-been first girlfriend Lindz, the camgirl sugarbaby Andrea, the performative urban llanero Paulo, and more lovers who not only leave their marks, but bring out sides of Garin and Lyrou nobody else sees.

Will their marriage survive like this? Should it? Are they even the same people anymore, or are they, finally, more truly themselves than they have ever been?

And could you or your spouse ever be the type?

-Pierce Amor

P.S.

This novel is completed and posts weekly on Lush. The prequel series, Cheater's Anthology, covers Lyrou's decade of extramarital affairs and flings before unsuspecting Garin knew her secret world. Cheater's Anthology will begin posting once The Type series has concluded.

Thank You!

https://www.lushstories.com/profile/PierceAmor/stories

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My apologies if this topic has been raised and answered before. If so, please point me in the right direction. I've scrolled through the topics and I've tried the search, but nothing really came up.

So - how attached do you become to your characters?

As a newbie, I'm still trying to hone my craft. I've noticed that I tend to develop an attachment to several of the characters I've created. I even accidentally fell in love with a gorgeous redhead whose fate I had envisioned was entirely different, and she ended up as the main character in a different story.

My attachment also pushes me to dig deeper into their stories, and I let them evolve far beyond my initial idea.

So, my stories end up in a series, and when a series comes to an end, I feel genuine loss.

How far does your attachment to your characters reach, and have I fallen victim to a noob trap?

I'm very attached to my characters, and would be thrilled to be able to speak to them in their world.. after the events of their story. Is that crazy? Yes, I imagine them as fully formed humans.

I got to cum 5 or 6 days per week, so if I'm not getting pussy on a given day I'm probably yanking one out either before going to sleep or when I'm home alone mid-day.

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I'm not too fond of most American porn, but the good ones are very good.

Never have and unsure if I would, but if I had to it would be with a much younger guy she would never meet again. That would make it the most ok with me that it could be, in the same way some wives don't care or hurt so much if their husband had a one-night with an anonymous younger woman.

Short answer: the bigger the better to DD. Bigger than that isn't often aesthetic, form is lost to immensity and sag.

But it's not the only feature or the most important, wide hips is prerequisite.